Reviews for Elevator |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I certainly enjoyed reading this one. It was odd and endearing. Nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Lucinda makes him question himself to the point where he's so confused that she has no trouble stealing his wallet-brilliant one-shot ] |
![]() ![]() I like it. Lucinda reminds me of my friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's cute! and incredibly funny i love that she snagged his wallet |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was funny. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, this was SO fun to read. No, really. I just loved it... it left me speechless, dammit! So you should be honoured I actually reviewed before favoriting. Actually, you shouldn't be. I always do it. Manners, see. Or should I say respect? Maybe It's just my way of being nice, who knows. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is crazy awesome! HAHA, I loved it, the irony of it all it was very entertaining, I especially love Lucinda. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! Absolutely :p It's witty and I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bahahaa! omg i lovedd this! it was soo greatt! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great story! I laughed at the end, very unexpected and clever! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this ia an awesome story. well-written and a great story. I loved the way you showed that the stereotypical first inpressions henry had of lucinda were so wrong. first impressions arent always right. Loved it! Haelo ;p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. I loved it! Lucinda was a great character. I could picture them both really well, but especially her. You did a great job. I loved the characters and really everything about it. It's a shame it's not longer, but it would be a different turn for the story. Great ending. Made me laugh. Write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was brilliant! She shakes him up, makes him question himself, and then she robs him blind! Most excellent woman, I loved it. Ollie May |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. Elements of 'Derailed', but clever. Loved the mini-twist. |