Reviews for Elevator
fairy Eva chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
I certainly enjoyed reading this one. It was odd and endearing. Nicely done.
WishBlade chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I love how Lucinda makes him question himself to the point where he's so confused that she has no trouble stealing his wallet-brilliant one-shot ]
Gillu the gilehri chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
I like it. Lucinda reminds me of my friend.
teardropsONroses chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
it's cute!

and incredibly funny

i love that she snagged his wallet
blurrylights chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
This was funny. Good job.
Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Oh wow, this was SO fun to read. No, really. I just loved it... it left me speechless, dammit! So you should be honoured I actually reviewed before favoriting. Actually, you shouldn't be. I always do it. Manners, see. Or should I say respect? Maybe It's just my way of being nice, who knows.
DirtyLiar chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
This is crazy awesome!

HAHA, I loved it, the irony of it all it was very entertaining, I especially love Lucinda.
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Brilliant! Absolutely :p

It's witty and I like it.
SamanthaAllison chapter 1 . 3/8/2008

omg i lovedd this!

it was soo greatt!
Fienty chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
That was a great story! I laughed at the end, very unexpected and clever! :)
Haeloed chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Hey, this ia an awesome story. well-written and a great story.

I loved the way you showed that the stereotypical first inpressions henry had of lucinda were so wrong. first impressions arent always right.

Loved it!

Haelo ;p
JojoAnn chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Brilliant. I loved it! Lucinda was a great character. I could picture them both really well, but especially her. You did a great job. I loved the characters and really everything about it. It's a shame it's not longer, but it would be a different turn for the story.

Great ending. Made me laugh. Write more.
Ollie May chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
That was brilliant! She shakes him up, makes him question himself, and then she robs him blind! Most excellent woman, I loved it.

Ollie May
Philip Ellis chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Nicely done. Elements of 'Derailed', but clever. Loved the mini-twist.