Reviews for Nightmare
Kar-zid chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Great style of writing, very descriptive. _
Mr.Satire chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Very good! That must've been one BAD nightmare to keep you awake like that, but you sure did the right thing with it!
cat-tif chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
I find myself not wanting to go to bed now...
diamond-dust08 chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
why haven't i seen this before? *bashes head*

anyway very meaningful and beautiful. i really don't do reviews for poetry, but i found myself clicking the review button to tell you that i love this one. i dunno, maybe because... i had a nightmare last night too, so i was able to identify with this poem.

keep writing these brilliant pieces up, and i'll be watching!

DD
ShadowsWeaver1 chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
'Dark dreams, flooded with light'that ws my favorite line. I love a happy ending. I didn't know you wrote poetry, now i know you are not like any other guy i know. I love poetry. There is always so much more thought behind the lines than in simply writing a normal scentence. So much hidden meaning, so much more emotion captured in style and flow than in words. I really liked the...how to say this...'choppy'...not the right word, but bear with me...feeling. The lines are abrupt, but i think it adds to the feeling of fear and anxiety. ie. 'to stalk my dreams' enough said right? no need to explain how (though a visual would have been nice, being that you said 'my own inner fears' i guess that just leaves the reader to imagine their own inner fears right?)LOL look at me! i even ramble in my reviews!hehehe your name is Justin! HA! now i know! that's what you get for sending me to this site! kukukukuku!No seriously just playing :) Twas a beautiful poem. However, i was slightly saddened that the so called 'story' that i came to this site to read doesn't even have a first chapter! what's up with that? only a prologue? Gah! well, let me know when there is and actual chapter for me to read eh?Ok, i'm done now...the ramble is complete. ChowShadow-sama