|Reviews for The Promise|
| Pixilated chapter 2 . 11/3/2006
Don't worry your story is not bad. The events seem a little rushed- last time I recall you don't just meet someone and then later offer yourself to accompany the guy lol. Um over all is really good. I like it, it migth be a slightly cliche in the encounter but none the less is a good cliff hanger. Is really good I am sure you will get alot reviews.
| I Have Moved chapter 2 . 9/5/2006
OH! Cliff hanger! Please keep this up, I'm enjoying reading! thanks. Ashleigh
| I Have Moved chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Woot! Good start. Just don't let it flop from now on! I can feel a good story coming on, and I'll definately be following. So keep it up and please write more! Love Ashleigh. P.s Shine Brightly!