Reviews for That is, if you read this
EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
People always TRY to write poems that will affect its readers, yet no one will ever come out and say that that's what they're trying to do. Good on you.
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
simplistic and gorgeous. i would copy and paste what i like... but it would be the entire poem. however, i'm especially fond of "and shake out mean words that rattle your chest."

-aly
citrus scented chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
oh. wow. this is so beautiful. so simply put, but powerful images and choice of words. "and shake out mean words that rattle your chest." beautiful.
x account closed x chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
So do I.

And trust me, you do.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
A baby Chandra creation - I like it, I feel the same way. I think poetry is very fast, unlike novels the whole plot and meaning is jam-packed into a smaller scope and it should envelope the reader - make them see, make them understand, put them in that position, make them swell and dream with you. Keep up the good work, and for goodness sake don't go so long between updates my'dear.

Much love,Juliet.
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Cool, simple and honest.
diffident chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
My mouth is waning, my chest is shaking, and I'm full. This is absolutely wonderful.

marie