Really love this idea, especially with the little twist at the end where she actually knew who he was!

Ending a little stalkerish, but I still loved it!

Awwww! That was so cute:3

dis is absoutely adorable nd AWESUM :)

Cute X3

Ahhhh! I am so in love with this story! It's so great and I'm totally a movie buff so the details you included were great. I really enjoyed reading this, awesome job!

This was wonderful. I loved it.

I have a mission! im going to watch every single movie you mentioned. even the chick flicks :)

lovely story. its better short me thinks. can't imagine it being a full one.

Wow that was so fantastically adorable. I swear i gave a little girly shriek at the end of this. I love the protaganist and his antagonist (his fear). I love people who love movies and i'm a total romantic so this story is perfect. It would have been awesome if you made it full length, but I think it has a sort of quaintness in its one-shot form. You're a freaking genius, i hope you wrote more stories like this because i'm prepared to cyber stalk your profile.

This was incredible, I wish i had a movie quote that could summarize how I feel right now. I guess i'll just stick to smiley's :) :D XD

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I love it :) So cute.

Incredibly cute. I adored it. :D It's not everyday you find a romance story bloom from Blockbuster. :D I love both the characters; they're perfect in their own little way, honest to orange polka dots. I like Ryan's nervousness; it's quite endearing. And Lynne is portrayed really well, like your typical American teenager with a great personality. I always liked movies. :D

wow , 3 old school but it still makes my

This was so good. I really liked that it was from the guy's POV. I think you did amazing with it. I mean, I don't know if you're a guy or not, but a lot of the time when I read things from a guy's POV, it seems girly to me, and maybe guys really are girly, but just act tough? But I liked this because I mean, his thought process was a lot like how some of my guy friends and my ex boyfriend talks, so it made it really realistic.

Love,

Becca

God, I loved that! I fucking loved that! And I love you too, for coming up with that. YOu rock!

This was such a good one-shot..really sweet. I don't think you should change it into a full length story. It would take away from the magic. Lynne and Ryan have their perfect story here. It doesn't really need more. :)