Reviews for Bruised |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, you scared me there for a while. I thought it's Mike's funeral. Thank god it's not! Mike is so cute XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story pretty much! Even though there're quite a number of typo errors & misunderstandings, hope you can improvise it if you're free:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really cute story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure if you're aware, but in cases of dissociative identity disorder, the true person is not aware of the other personalities. The fabricated personalities are aware of it however. And in no circumstances do they argue with each other. That's closer to schizophrenia. I just wanted to comment because I really do like this story. I think it's interesting and cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! And so THIS is the boy that asked for soup from Penny. XD Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, The joy of angst! Good Job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe i loved this! It was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, shame it's over. :[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would love to beta-read for you. Puh-LEEZE! you are a genius! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what does chris do for a living...psychiatric bills, medicine, the doctor bills, and a new truck. i know there is insurance, but that is A LOT of money. just wondering. i might just have to do what he does. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok so when mike dies does Chris go crazy and think that mike it there but he's really not, and the whole "say goodbye to my mom" thing just mean that his mom is at his funeral (not dead) and he wants to see her one last time? OR do they bring Mike back to life and the mom was really the one who died at the funeral?...i hope you could understand that X_X |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw poor mike :( i don't know if it would be worse if "the girl" was someone he hated or someone he loved that died...the 'loved them and they died' thing might be worse but not by much. love the stary so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really, really liked this story. i cried for poor chris and mike. they really do make a good couple. chris needed someone to love him and so did mike. glad mike's bitch of a mom died and that evil mike is 're a great writer, spelling didn't matter to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have storytelling talent, I wanna beta-read for you. |
![]() ![]() I was a slightly disappointed when "tough" Mike was suppressed. Heh. He grows on you. |