Reviews for Bruised
Fumiki chapter 11 . 10/6/2011
Oh my, you scared me there for a while. I thought it's Mike's funeral. Thank god it's not!

Mike is so cute XD
Bluez Rosen Dreams chapter 11 . 11/5/2009
Loved the story pretty much! Even though there're quite a number of typo errors & misunderstandings, hope you can improvise it if you're free:)
Penemuel chapter 12 . 10/14/2009
This was a really cute story.
i-see-faeries chapter 7 . 3/15/2009
I'm not sure if you're aware, but in cases of dissociative identity disorder, the true person is not aware of the other personalities. The fabricated personalities are aware of it however. And in no circumstances do they argue with each other. That's closer to schizophrenia. I just wanted to comment because I really do like this story. I think it's interesting and cute.
Azrael Adamine Gaunt chapter 12 . 9/1/2008
Loved it! And so THIS is the boy that asked for soup from Penny. XD Well done!
Account Disused chapter 11 . 4/5/2008
Ah, The joy of angst!

Good Job!
Fictatiousrambler chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Hehe i loved this! It was great!
Back of Beyond chapter 11 . 2/4/2008
Great story, shame it's over. :[
kylesanchez chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
i would love to beta-read for you. Puh-LEEZE! you are a genius!
kylesanchez chapter 11 . 1/21/2008
what does chris do for a living...psychiatric bills, medicine, the doctor bills, and a new truck. i know there is insurance, but that is A LOT of money. just wondering. i might just have to do what he does. lol
maggiepyro101 chapter 11 . 1/6/2008
ok so when mike dies does Chris go crazy and think that mike it there but he's really not, and the whole "say goodbye to my mom" thing just mean that his mom is at his funeral (not dead) and he wants to see her one last time? OR do they bring Mike back to life and the mom was really the one who died at the funeral?...i hope you could understand that X_X
maggiepyro101 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
aw poor mike :( i don't know if it would be worse if "the girl" was someone he hated or someone he loved that died...the 'loved them and they died' thing might be worse but not by much. love the stary so far
enternally-dark90 chapter 12 . 8/10/2007
i really, really liked this story. i cried for poor chris and mike. they really do make a good couple. chris needed someone to love him and so did mike. glad mike's bitch of a mom died and that evil mike is 're a great writer, spelling didn't matter to me.
Limited Edition chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
You have storytelling talent, I wanna beta-read for you.
fei-yen chapter 12 . 10/12/2006
I was a slightly disappointed when "tough" Mike was suppressed. Heh. He grows on you.
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