Reviews for Broken Poems
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
w *sque!* I loved this one! Dude, this is so going in my favs..

My fav part has to be the last, "Withers". It's as if it is a poem all in itself, yet still remins with a connecting tie to the other poems. Very well thought of. I kept rereading the part about my disease being the shadow of who I used to be. Something about that line is very... inticing to read again. I think it brings up a very stong image.

Beautifully written as always, but his one in particular... wow. Awesome job!
Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
well like i said just a sec ago:raped was the best at the flowynessi liked the words of bornand i luved withers! its amazing how so few lines can make a a haiku...but better...cuz i'm not like fanatic about haiku's...i like these sam i am!
Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
The way the poem is set up is unique, very interesting. I like it .

I think you should raise the rating to at least k. I don't think children that young would understand this.

This is a very deep poem. Very agnsty, dark. Beautifully done. Great job.

unspecified chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
great ideas! i love them all, you are a really great writer.

write on!

drblueface chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
The subtle bolding to spell the titles is a very alluring tactic! Bravo, I say, bravo. The topics are frightfully engaging, too.

Keep up the great writing! _