|Reviews for Beach Walk|
| drblueface chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Absolutely gorgeous! You've captured the sea, and my heart. mind you, the difference is foggy.
I have no advice for you, only both my upward thumbs. I love this piece. _
Keep up the great writing!
| Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
"while the ground wears blue shells strewn like old bone"-very pretty
This is lovely and calm and poetic; you have some really beautiful imagery. I think some of your lines are a bit mundane; for example, the line "of all life, where unbidden darkness dwells" is really wonderful, but the line following it, "where we see light and all of its pretense" feels like to falls short.
I also liked "bare feet step on quivering shells and stones/next to dull sea glass". Lovely writing, good job.