Reviews for Trying to breathe
diamonds and opals chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
oh this one was scary true. Ordinary things are frightening aren't they?
dustytiger chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
wow, this is really good, the last stanza was rather eerie and looming but it really worked for the peice, i enjoyed if very much, great job on this thank you for the reivew