Reviews for The School Showers |
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![]() ![]() I loved this story. Are you ever gonna get back to it..? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story a few days ago, shame it was unfinished but for as long as it is still amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! AND MAKE THEM HAVE SEX! I AM WEIRD .-. |
![]() ![]() Please post again |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally need to set some boundaries when it comes to Fp, don't know what possesses me to read unfinished stories it's like i keep falling into this same old trap its such a waste that stories with so much potential are lost here, makes me sad but anyways was a really good story. Its crazy to think though that when this was last updated I was in my 1st/2nd year of high school. Anyway please finish this so that i can take solace in at least one of my meny unfinished stories being completed. If you want any advise drop me an email. |
![]() ![]() Awesome please updat e , please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this story is amazing. Come back to it pleaaassse |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please post part 21. This is my favorite story |
![]() ![]() Please update. I would like to know what happens next with Salem and Jeremy. Plz continue writing. |
![]() ![]() I thought it would be safe to read when I saw 20 chapters. I really thought it would be safe to read when you promised you would finish it. I guess the joke's on me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only issue that I have with this story is that I feel it is going nowhere, or at the least, taking too long to reach an interesting point. It is definitely not the number of chapters, per se, as I have read others with longer chapters and felt satisfied, but I believe it is more about the lack of things that are going on; or maybe the opposite, many things going all at once that I become confused. Do you gather what I mean? Even now, I am not sure what to feel about the story. I will keep reading it of course, but I simply don't feel that need to. Regardless, good job so far. |
![]() ![]() Such an amazing fic. Wish you would keep it going. |
![]() ![]() And then? |
![]() ![]() um so i guess this story is abandoned? tough. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE THE STORY.! I SO WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT WHEN JERMEY WILL COME OUT AND HOW THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN HIM AND SALEM! PLEASE.! |