|Reviews for Color Wheel|
| Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
This is pretty nice!
I love the whole repition thing, but you but a twist in it by changing the clors. Original, unique, and beautiful.
| delete account asap chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
It's great how you keep repeeting the first and the third line, but each time with a different colour. It holds the poem to gether and adds imagery to it. And I like how the poem slowly becomes more depressing.
P.S. I'd be really interested to hear your opinion of the story I'm writing.