Reviews for Islam Peace
Jainblu chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Hi.

I like the message of your poem..

neighbours in faith...

but i just wanted to correct you on the islam is peace thing.

Although islam derives from the root- salam(peace)

there are also at least 4 other meanings...

Basically Islam is; submission, sincerity, obedience, surrender and peace, in your relationship between you and your Creator.

SO though your relationship with god is sustained through peace and such.. most literally Islam means submission to the will of God.

take care
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
may i just point out that i love u for real now? this haiku is awesome! (but i'm biased with this review since it holds a personal sense for me, so i guess the praise doesnt really count. lolz) obviously going on my favs (remains unsaid) and i agree with the other reviewer...its short and to the point. i tried to do that with my work, but i always end up writing loads of lines...anywayz, brilliant :D

mez
ArcaneTongue chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Short, Sweet, to the point.

Nicely done.