|Reviews for Goodnight, Farewell|
| Emmasj chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Very nice. Intense.
Just a question, though, about the ending . . . did you mean to make it seem like Leanne died as well? It seemed that way, because of the last two lines, but it really takes a lot more than a piece of glass in a wrist to kill someone.
I really think the best part was the beginning . . . while No Name Boy is looking at the pictures, and thinking. Fabulously intense! It doesn't feel finished after that, but I think once it starts talking with the mother, the story goes downhill. Oh, and if he has a name, sorry - I didn't notice it, and I can't find it now, so . . . yeah.
But overall, great story! Love it.
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Ouch. It's crazy how one little action could affect so many people. Nicely written..
| The Ponderer chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
oh my goodness... that freaked me out... wow. that was brilliant; everything worked so well together, if that made sense... Only one thing. After Matt dies, you could make it a bit clearer that you're now switching to the mother's viewpoint. but otherwise, that was brilliant.