|Reviews for Offered Me Skin|
| The Forgotten Maiden chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
| Toxic Paradise chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
I really like it. I'm not usually into the whole rhyming scheme, but on this one it was good. My favorite part is the line below. Good job!
"She said, “Why can’t you look into my eyes?
Why can’t you look into my thighs?
I give you all you need
All I ask is that you bleed"