Reviews for Finality
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
This image is so strange, but somehow appropriate. Nicely worded. And the idea of this devil waiting for you is frightening. Keep writing! :)
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
I like this way this sounds, the language and the breaks... but I'll admit to not understanding it :)
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
only in the 8th house?

could you not make it to the ninth, i mean, i need to finish that chapter.
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
I have a vague appreciation for this, but I always have trouble registering any sort of real pleasur ein haiku.
hanfiddle chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Nice one although I find the breaks a bit awkward: good atmosphere
Basara chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
after armageddon so the eternal punishment? a blibical haiku...

trash can art chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
I had to think about this one for a while, actually. It's funny how most of your haikus stay with me much longer than lengthier poems.

'angel tears sits in the eighth house' actually make me think of the nine gates of hell, especially with the 'a devil crying' part.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Fascinating. I loved those last two lines.