| Reviews for If You Loved Me Enough |
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   supergal chapter 1 . 10/21/2006 Hey, I'm getting a good sense of fervor and anger in this chapter, but I think the dialogue is somewhat awkward(?) I think it's because of the grammatical mistakes, for example: 'Sometimes you’d be cold and others you’ll be warm!'. Just try and weave through out the chapter to weed out any grammar/spelling mistakes. Keep writing! |
| DorKiyki chapter 1 . 10/20/2006 hey hil-billy? iunno since annie keeps calling tat..i guess i'll call u tat to then. aniways..great plot lol i got confused in the first chapter, buh dun worry i got. pretty sad though..buh that breden evermore is realli a jerk..no offense. aniways i'm so sry it took me so long to R&R if you loved me enough...cuz i'm not realli allowed to use the internet since my parents saw my mark on the interm report thingy..buh i think i can manage going on every once a week. aniways other that.. . read my new story Love me Kiss me. lol wen i was cleaning up my old books and stuff, i found this discontinued story. so i though i shud probably finish it up lol. and stop thinking i luv u wen i clearly don't T_T |
| xonea chapter 16 . 10/18/2006 really nice! but i've got to ask...wats the first chapter all about? i dun really get the first chapter! ) |
| ms.fuzzy chapter 16 . 10/18/2006 GOOD JOB! the story is really coming along. and its shaping up really well. keep up the good work! |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 1 . 10/17/2006 wow sounds intense |
| xonea chapter 15 . 10/12/2006 I like itt! |
| Jasmine chapter 2 . 10/11/2006 hello you i love your stories you should become a writer and ill buy all your books i rememeber this from you know what see how good of a memory i have of our friendship |
| Zenosknight chapter 14 . 10/10/2006 Al'ight, great work Pmany questions were answered, more were asked, twists were straightened, nevertheless, good work |
| Luv-TU chapter 14 . 10/6/2006 I liked it |
| Lch867 chapter 13 . 10/6/2006 Very Interesting. Good Story. I hope you keep updating. |
| n-Iceness chapter 13 . 10/6/2006 this is amazing! |
| diana chapter 1 . 9/23/2006 hilly billy not sure if i reviewed yet so umm yeahh i really love your plot line im hooked! ) but your street slang is kinda funny you should get a guy to beta this story cause umm "dont freak your pants"? thats uhh not really *cough cough* you know like a popular term...O but yeah i love your plots they're so interesting ) btw same with leanna sometimes her sentences sound a bit weird maybe you're trying too hard to make her sound prissy and uptight? |
| Mashfia chapter 1 . 9/22/2006 interesting so far. cant wait to read the rest. |
| Zenosknight chapter 11 . 9/20/2006 Great job so far~You haven't updated in a while, but schools in, so it's great, unexpected, creative, so I'll rate it about a 4-...so far P |
| thepersonthatlovestrumpets chapter 1 . 8/15/2006 lol long time since u wrote... but u still got the magical writing power D the chapter is a lil bit confusing but ill read ur other chapters later to get it... keep up the good work! |