Reviews for Stumbling Victims
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
there definatly needs to be a stop to the war.

but its been going on for some time now.
CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
Rest In Peace, for the victims. A beautiful and tearful memorial to those involved. x
Arichos chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Ouch. I didn't really hear about the Indian Bombings, but war is never pretty. You have good thoughts here, the confusion is described well, with the added innocence of a citizen. Awesome writing
Tecna chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
The way you write your poems is so touching that most of the time it's unexplainable, it's filled with emotions and feelings that gets the readers thinking in such depths but all in all you are an awesome poet and I hope to read more of such brill work from you! You trully inspire me to be myself and prove myself! For that thank you so much Mez!Tecna ;)
mindOFdeliriousUNREST chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
this is amazing writing, and i understand how worried you were. i'm also glad you didn't have to go through what i did on september 11, 2001, when three of my friends' parents were caught and killed in the world trade center. you're very lucky, and a good writer. kepp it up- mindOFdeliriousUNREST
queenvixta chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Another brilliant piece. The pain and sorrow was so painful through your words. You are a really talented poet. Well done with this! Vx