|Reviews for The Atheist Part 1|
| hey maria chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
"I can’t imagine ever being driven by something like that. Addiction."
I love the irony in that line.
This is an incredible story. Your narration is easy to follow, conversational, and natural. If there's another chapter in this, I'm looking forward to reading it. Great job.
| the-foresight chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Wow, just wow. That was amazing, the narrative was so natural, like a natural stream of words. I loved the way you meandered around different thoughts and emotions. It was interesting and never dull Just really, really good. No, not good, fantastic. That's better.