|Reviews for saccade|
| crazy dog events chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
spider lashes. Awesome.
| Abella chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Honestly, my first thought was "Huh?", so I read it a few more times. I like the simplicity of it mostly, and how you didn't add anything else to it. Sweet and to the point. I like it.
| realityescapesher chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
simple. gorgeous. i love it.
| diffident chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
I love "framed by her ash-colored spider lashes" but the rest of the poem is just sort of blah, uneventful, etc. I don't really like the bit about candy canes (even if that's basically what this poem is about) but maybe that's just because I don't particularly enjoy candy canes. But maybe you don't either, and that's the point. It just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem, though. It's probably just me.