Reviews for saccade
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
spider lashes. Awesome.
Abella chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Honestly, my first thought was "Huh?", so I read it a few more times. I like the simplicity of it mostly, and how you didn't add anything else to it. Sweet and to the point. I like it.
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
simple. gorgeous. i love it.

-aly
diffident chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
I love "framed by her ash-colored spider lashes" but the rest of the poem is just sort of blah, uneventful, etc. I don't really like the bit about candy canes (even if that's basically what this poem is about) but maybe that's just because I don't particularly enjoy candy canes. But maybe you don't either, and that's the point. It just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem, though. It's probably just me.

marie