wow, she just walks in and walks out calmly. i don't know who would do that.

he is really full of himself .. The chapters seem short but not to short(I don't really like long chapters but very short chapters are really annoying too) your chapters are perfect. .

Chapter 11, was quite a surprise when West had found out that his lover was an illusion...so I'm glad you finally wrote another chapter and hope there's more to it...and also if he's gonna stop imagining his lover and probably accept Neil as his lover..and im calling the person he illusioned "his lover" because i don't remember his name and it's been a long time since I read the story so it was a surprise to see a new update! and excuse many errors from this review

this story is a great read when reading it i felt well your supposed to feel things when reading books of this kind it made me want to smash the screen and drag it out get rid of it out of sheer frustration and weep with sorrow and sadness at the fact that he thinks its in his head but i dont think it is i think that his mother and his ex made it seem that way her out of revenge and the mother because she didnt want a fag for a son but i have one question where is alex and will there be any more sorry thats two i have just found this story and its sad that its not completed oh well sorry for going on like that hope you have more of this wonderful story check up on you later

This story is a magnificent piece of art. :)

Wow! An update after so long! Well, this is interesting. And I cant wait till they open that package! I think they might find pictures of Alexander! That would be awesome! But then I wonder why everyone says he was a hallucination... its all strange and I cant wait till it all unravles!

I want Alexander back.

Reading this chapter reminded me of why I loved this work. It also reminded me why I hated but then came to terms and then loved the twist you threw in. AND also why I still think Alexander is real.

Thanks again for the great work.

ps. I almost (without the crazy mom and conspiracies) wish my life was like his...but sadly my career choice took me off track a little bit...maybe I'll take a few years off after undergrad...

I really don't think Alexander was ever a hallucination.. and the fact that the psychiatrist is puzzled by West's supposed symptoms and subsequent diagnosis and treatment of schizophrenia also makes me skeptical that it was all a hallucination- perhaps it is possible.. perhaps it was fabricated.

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Glad to see this updating again. It's so very intense and gripping even after the time between the updates.

I love your writing. It's entrancing in a way.

I love everything about your story. The way you write, your characters, even the chapter titles!Its truely amazing.

C: I'm just curious... what songs were listening to while you were writing the chapters of this story?

I wasn't sure what I thought of this story when I started it but I found myself unable to stop reading. It is so compelling. Your tone drew me in, not from the mind as I was expecting, but rather from the heart. I got the end of this chapter without realizing it was the last written and it took me a good five minutes to calm down because I needed to know what happens and if there were pictures of Alexander on the film West's mother took out of his camera. It wasn't curiosity to know the ending, it was a need.

The last date listed as the update for this story is February so I'm not sure if you are continuing this story or not. I do hope that this story is continued because it's been a long time since I've been drawn to a story.

So, uh are we ever going to see Alexander again? These last few chapters really went crazy. I never would have thought that Alexander was a hallucination, and it really makes me sad, but I've got this whole side theory that Alexander was real, but I'm probably so wrong. Here's my theory anyway: Alexander was real, all of West's friends probably just didn't meet him, Kristen's a jealous freak, and West's mom was one of those crazy overbearing mother's who just didn't want to lose her kid. So, she made up his hallucinations, paid off the doctors and kept her kid at home so she could always have him even though he was all drugged up and stuff. Oh, and Sam's a hallucination who will never live up to Alexander's hallucinated/real greatness.

I don't care wat any1 says Alexander is real. I expect to see him return later in the story or else. I don't care if you have to make West relapse again to make Alex come bak. but it is just far too depressing to not have Alex. and for the record i don't think he is crazy. i think his stupid slutty ex just lied about not cuting up the pix and idk. but i really can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE BRING ALEXANDER BAK!