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rebellious spirit chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
i dont know much about haikus but i really like this one here!
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
I like the fact that you've writen a good haiku. I'v always had trouble with those.

I can relate to this piece, and I'm glad you didn't try and make this into one of those dragged out, too long, pieces that are littering the site as of late.
Tawny Dawson chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
I really like this haiku, great job!
first-casualty-of-war chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Very powerful. I really liked this (and thank you for the review!)
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
The tone in this makes it work. Good haiku.
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
o0o0o0o can relate lol... realy great!
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
wow, powerful statement
Basara chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
well, demanding people can be really annoying...

great!
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
You when with?*squles* thank you! i cant write about the way i feel..how do you do it?
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
*applaudes*, well said. Keep writing!

Anna _
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
What? :) Good job!
commemorativemisery chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
i like this one. it kind of reminds me of how much i hate my mom.

excellent job
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Wow, I think you have a great talent, either that or your choice of words was serendipitous.

This says what it says in exactly the right way.

Keep writing

Alan