Reviews for A Crayola Crayon World
Dying Rose chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
This is so not typical of me, but I love this poem. It has a beautiful lightness to it that I haven't ever achieved in my poetry. Being an artist, I can relate to wanting to re-color the world. This has a striking innocence throughout the poem. The wording is simple and lovely and it flows nicely. Great job!
dreamforever101 chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Pretty good poem... I like content ...

About the word choice and writing style..

Sometime it has a nice and easy rhythm when you read and in other parts it doesn't... ( and I dunno y u'd paint it gray and then talk abt painting it different colors... maybe choose a color other than gray... cuz gray is really a shade and not very colorful usually)

But i love these two lines :

The world is ever changingSo why shouldn't the colors, too?

It is soo true, and I like the poem in General! Good Job!

please review back :)

-Dreamforever101
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
For some weird, unexplainable reason...I really like this poem! Go you!
EmoAssassin chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
I really like this poem! It may e a little kiddish but everyone has a little kid in them, its good that you can bring that out!
Electric Tape chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
That's a really cute poem. I liked it _