Reviews for Dead Lands
behindstonewalls chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
whoah, great poem, i love the analogy and view of society, it really makes you think *adds to favorite stories*
Torn and Tattered chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
this reminds me of some of the stories i write. when the enemy is possibly ourselves, an all too real enemy. war and pain that tear apart. this was good. imagine where you'll be in a few years! (don't leave me completely in the dust... please)

-Phoenix