Reviews for Taking in Silence
Kir Sirin chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
Ha! How horrible. "I like this poem, but I think it has issues." What the hell? Who says that? Oh man, just what a new writer needs. Some people shouldnt be so blunt.

-Tell Tarzan I say hi too! Kir.
dreamforever101 chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
I can actually see waht the words are describing!

Good job!plz review back :)

- Dreamforever101
NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
This is very good. I love it. You're descriptions are wonderful..

Also just letting you know that poem I wrote that you reviewed. I deleted it and then republished it under another poem as a chapter two : so it's under a poem titled I'd Rather as Chapter two : Dear Stranger. You don't have to re-review if you don't want, but I just thought I'd let ya know. )

That was how I had originally wanted it to be, but then I went and forgot to publish it the right way. lol. Anyway I'm done rambling now.
With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
I like your idea, but you execute it with a small amount of control. Your line length is erratic, and there's no sense of flow. Your words are poetic, but that's where the poetic characteristics basically end. Again, your idea is stellar, and you should really try to convey it in a more polished way-go more in-depth with your emotions, but keep them under control.

Very intriguing poem, but with a few issues.

J