Reviews for Broken Memories
PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
So sad, but well-written. Good job and I hope the bad memories don't over-take the good ones!
The Candle Thief chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
Hm...didn't really stand out to me that much. I like the image of the memory having sharp, unforgiving edges, but I wish you elaborated it so that it became just a bit more deep and thoughtful. In other words, I think if you could give it a bit more length and detail.

-Ramen
LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
I don't know what you wrote this about, but it reminds me of old friends and stuff...It brilliant"
The Ponderer chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
wow. i like how this poem is so full of meaning and yet so short. nakes it really, really powerful, and i felt like i could relate to it so so easily. nicely done.
Aryanda chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
awesome piece, and very thoughtful too. great job!