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![]() ![]() i’m just gonna put it out there i LOVE that reference to sam and dean and as soon as it said “67 chevy impala” i was like :O |
![]() ![]() Trust me, dialogue is my favourite too, since I feel the other paragraphs are always stretched. I sometimes just read fast until the next dialogue. |
![]() ![]() *speechless* I should go to bed now |
![]() ![]() I’m currently supposed to be sleeping but I have to read this. |
![]() ![]() I love it too much |
![]() ![]() One of the best stories I have read here on Fiction Press. I absolutely loved it! An amazing story. Thank you for sharing it with us :) |
![]() ![]() Type your review here. You are awesome not only do you know how to write but also express emotions you are not rushing any thing just slowly and sweetly OMG! Here is an author who can write keep on with your writing style cause i think you have beat most authors that i read their stories have a goody goody day |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh this is awesome! You know, I decided to listen to the song whilst reading this chapter and it was perfect, how you made it all flow! Okay, so I loved everything about this, including the plot and the whole description which was really good, by the way. I just love everything in this, including the ending. Great job! *sighs blissfully* 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Whatever." I say, silencing him with a look. "I wanted to talk to you about…" Lowering my voice to a whisper I lean in closer to him, "about code Almond Joy." "Why did we name it that again?" Teigan asks, his voice also lowered to a whisper. "Because you were eating one at the time and neither of us is very creative. But, anyway, I have an idea." I pause, expecting him to say something. BEST PART! |
![]() ![]() it is a really good story! |
![]() ![]() I lyk d way u ended with a peaceful ending. Duke's mom is really cool, as in , cool. And Darren is my kinda guy. Keep it up, though i tink u should be using Delaney , instead of Duke. It's make her sound... Beautiful |
![]() ![]() Hey :) I notice a mistake and I couldn't help point it out. I'm French. And 'Le restaurant de Fantaisie' does not mean 'The fancy restaurant'. It actually means 'The restaurant of fantasy'. If you want to mean 'The fancy restaurant' you should use 'Le restaurant de luxe'. Just so you know XOXO |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter had me grinning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had me laughing at The Thumbtacks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the fact that she's a cheerleader! Things are getting even more interesting now. |