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![]() ![]() ![]() that is a fab chapter, in a freking amazing story! new reviewer but im hooked so please update soonly! -midge p.s. homesickness...the easiest cure is to go home. barring that keep busy. if you cant think about it, its easier to forget! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY. Its so good. Post more ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot is great. The story caught my attention and kept it from the creativity. I'd recommend switching from present to past tense. The storyline will just go alot smoother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon you're doin such an awesome job |
![]() ![]() ![]() oohh this was fantastic! i love how you describe everything, from what each person is wearing to thier expressions- it's brilliant. Update soon! About the homesickness..hm...you could web-cam I do it ALL the time! Who knows it might help you it def helps me! Good Luck in college!(isn't so much different from highschool..) |
![]() ![]() Black '67 Impala? Metallica on cassette? Channelling Supernatural much? hahahaha I love that show! I really like this story. It's awesome! Keep it coming. -Jazmyn ps. sorry you're homesick! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a pretty good story so far. I'm glad I decided to read it. Can't wait for the next update. Hope it's soon. You wanted to know about errors, and there were a few that I spotted as I was reading this. Unfortunately, I read this all in one go and I can't remember where they are. I just rereading it again. |
![]() ![]() Hey, I just wanted to say that, that was an interesting chapter. So many little things seemed to happen, that I am guessing will be turned into more significant things later? But the main reason I wanted to review was just to say that you denying Teigen that kiss, borders on inhuman treatment! LOL I hope that, that will be corrected soon. Well then, have a good day and keep writing so that you can update soon! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow, so this is a totally fun story! I'm really enjoying it. It's been such a good procrastination for me when I don't feel like doing my economics work! :) But I love it. And all I can say is Duke needs to get over whatever it is, and just admit she likes Teigan. I mean, please. She can't keep denying it. Awesome so far! Keep it up! Much love...Tin P.s. as for homesickness? I dunno, I haven't really had any yet. Granted, that might have to do with the fact that I hurt myself, and my family has to take me to physical therapy twice a week. But is it your family or friends? Whichever way, just call a lot, and stay in touch online. It helps bunches. Plus, making plans for when you all will be together. Good luck with it! Tin |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i enjoyed it :) 17 pages nice, i think ive only done 11 hahah. well please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this is great! the chapter lengths are a little varied, but still i love it! Chrome |
![]() ![]() I love this story so far and how can u not love Darren? Seriously, it's frustrating how Duke keeps running away from him. I know she's scared of falling for him but she can't avoid that forever. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it...cant wait for the next chapter... hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Is there a particular reason for Delaney's fear? Was there some traumatic event that occurred in her life to cause that wall to build? Hm, I guess I'll find out eventually. I love the story and can't wait for your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() homesickness...that hasn't happened to me yet. still in HS! well, i can't help you with that :( i was pretty shocked to discover that this chapter was WAY longer than the previous one. update yes? |