omg love.

I LOVE YOU! AN UPDATE! *glares offhandedly for not telling me you were updating so soon, and lunges with pillow in preparation for a pillow fight* I thought I was going to have to wait a week or more. Lol.

What are you going to do with me? Come on! You know you love it when I analyse (heehee, I spelled it your way) the story.

*grins* excellent chappie! btw...Saph needs a smack over the head for offering herself to Chase like that. She's lost her self-respect over the situation with Finn. The old her was a little more feisty and wouldn't have just resigned herself when she didn't even feel like it.

On another note. I love Chase. He's an excellent character and he knows how to treat people right. He's also good for waiting until he's ready and knowing that he shouldn't sleep with her on day one because she's worth more than that.

Also, Madden is admitting that he likes Cody finally! Yay!

And Tierli does seem nice...maybe I will like her after all. You'll just have to find someone else for her to like, other than the person you're planning. *shifty look*

lol...I got to go...heehee...I'm taking an exam in 20 minutes...a final exam. I need to slap myself on the forehead because I haven't even studied for it...oh, well...I'll do fine.

Anywho...have fun on your vacation to the coast...in two weeks, right? Well, enjoy...

And update soon! I know...I'm not allowed to say that because I haven't updated Pierced 2 yet. *chuckles and then pouts for good measure*

lol...anywho...I LOVED LOVED LOVED the chapter! The content was excellent...just punctuation errors. This is one of your best yet.

Oh, and Faith needs to tell Dom why she hated him. And he needs to be sensibly contrite on the matter...maybe even grovel a little...lol...ick 6 minutes 'til class! Bye!

Talk about the most random review ever, eh?

Okies, going...going...gone

argh more complications.. but that's lfe, isn't it?

i love rhe consistency of the characters.

...marshmallows, bunnies and sprinkles? Are the bunnies chocolate or real? Weird imagery there... ;)

Heya! Just been catching up on this the last few days... very much enjoying! Been too busy with work..

Now that I've run out of bits to read... when's the next? :P

Chris

I absolutely love the way you compose your chapters.

You put alot of information in them yet they do not become to long!

From this chapter i was left feeling soemthing bad was going to happen to saph maybe i was wrong?

Update soon!

Update soon please!

good

I love you for making this story. :) "almost had fingersex!" ah that cracked me up. The plot is genuinely heart wrenching and I'm anticipating Cody and Madden hooking up. But don't rush it! It'll ruin it, lol. Nice pace so far. Awesome awesome

i wish saph would tell cody.. but that may just open another can of worms

Ooh this fundraiser is going to be interesting. Can't wait to see how that turns out. And I'm glad Sapphire stood up for herself and told Finn to hit the road...he's a jerk! I'm so happy Madden noticed Cody's hair! It's the little things that count...update asap!

good chap, but i think what really stood out most to me was definitely sapphire's anguish. i really sympathized with her, and i'm glad that she finally realized that she was being used and broke it off with finn. i guess chase will be her love interest? maybe its just me, but it seems like dom's love for faith seems really sudden. i mean, from what i've seen, they really haven't had that many conversations and interactions, and his attraction to her seems to be solely based on the fact that he can't have her. I mean, what does he really know about her, to love her? anyways, i just thought maybe love is a bit of a strong word at this point of their non existent relationship. anyways, i love all the character pictures you put up, it really helped me visualize the characters. the person you put up for faith is gorgeous, who is she? and i think the person for cody really fits well, and i love how you dyed cody's hair to match the person in the pic. anyways, glad to read the update, and i hope you update soon!

Good chapt. It says a lot about the characters! :)

WHERE ARE MY MARSHMELLOWS, BUNNYS, AND SPINKLES! J/K. the e-mail service has been messed up. I just got my update like hmm mabye a day ago. Sorry. Poor Saph. but I feel worse for Cody.

Great chapter! I love how dom and cody are really starting to get that whole brother, sister relationship its really sweet. And i'm glad faith is really starting to let dom in. The auction fundraiser should be an interesting night. Hope u update soon.

ps - where are my marshmellows, bunnies and sprinkles? lol

Hm...many chapters read in one day.

Well, i dont think there is much to say about this, except that i love it. Lol, your review is so long...more to read, yay. Anyway, the characters are very well formed and are developing nicely (especially Dom, he has really changed since the beginning!) and i like Faith too! she's fun.

Anyway, i will be looking forward to an update. Much.

Take care and keep writing!

Autumn