| Reviews for Twenty five over |
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   dreamwriterdreams chapter 4 . 9/15/2006 WELL WRITTEN EVE!CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. |
| niz chapter 3 . 9/6/2006 hey great story so far.. i want to know whats going to happen :) please update :D |
| Pink Appreciation chapter 3 . 8/28/2006 I love your work. Very very real. It reminds me of when I was back in highschool. I was abit chubby. But see i went to far. Ended up in hospital. But all is good now. Im a healthy happy weight and very happy. |
| Libra Balancing Act chapter 1 . 8/27/2006 Cody is someone everyone can relate to, overwieght or otherwise. Please update soon. |
| Pandemonium chapter 3 . 8/26/2006 eheheh... heading off to Euroa again! Catchya on the joys of the world wide web! Roxette CD... I've been listening to one for the past six months while in Ireland! Was roommate's fav. CD... so wonder if that's the one you're mentioning? Not sure... Loved the pony line! |
| aphroditeseyes chapter 3 . 8/25/2006 “Not the Pony! Don’t take my pony!” Haha, I /loved/ that line. SO funny. Yeah, so I'm just reviewing to say that I really like what you've done with this story so far. You've taken the cliche fat girl/jock story and refreshed it. Well done! I look forward to reading the rest of this story. |
| Saniaaa chapter 3 . 8/24/2006 hey, i just found interesting. poor cody. ppl are so evil. madden is such a sweetie :D update soon! |
| StrawberryStarburst chapter 3 . 8/24/2006 Wow, what a beautiful story. Can't wait to see what happens next, so please update. |
| loveSZbrownie chapter 3 . 8/24/2006 I was crying when she ahd the sash on her!Tha is soo sad! There's not many of these stories...even if i wish there were. |
| KSDM1985 chapter 3 . 8/23/2006 Great long chapter, loved it. Keep up the good work. |
| Lady in Disguise chapter 3 . 8/23/2006 Great chapter! |
| Polished Gem chapter 3 . 8/23/2006 Ooh! I like it. I hope you update soon. This is definitely going underneath my author alert list. I want to know what happens next. Good job, btw. And I like Faye. |
| Polished Gem chapter 2 . 8/23/2006 Good stuff. I like the aftermath feelings and the way you mentioned that the chains of the swing were biting into her legs...it just seemed to match with the emotions at the moment. I think that her initial reactions could have been added upon though. It was almost whatever sounding at that minute...not really shocking and awful, just written like it was just another boring prank when it had such an aftermath effect on her. But don't take my criticisms too harshly. I think it was a superbly well-written chappie.~Polished Gem |
| Polished Gem chapter 1 . 8/23/2006 *chuckles* take it like a man, huh? lol. Well, it don't have anything real bad to say anyway. You've caught my interest. I just wonder what will happen next. |
| icedfaerie chapter 3 . 8/23/2006 Great chapter! It was definately longer then the previous one. I can't wait until the next one! |