|Reviews for Ghost Upon the Ocean|
| InkandIntrospection chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Great imagery. I'm normally not into rhyming poems, but I like this because the rhymes do not sound forced. Nice job.
| Austere chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
'How sea of blue, and sand of gold
Destroys the lies that we were told.'
My favorite line.
Nice flow to the story. You're an amazing writer!
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
I love anything that has to do with the ocean or anything nautical, so I really enjoyed this. The emotion in this is tangible; I could feel the sorrow of the speaker. The only flaw of this poem that I noticed was with the rhyme (or lack thereof) of the first two lines. Other than that minor thing, this was well done. Keep writing!