Reviews for Ghost Upon the Ocean
InkandIntrospection chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Great imagery. I'm normally not into rhyming poems, but I like this because the rhymes do not sound forced. Nice job.
Austere chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
'How sea of blue, and sand of gold

Destroys the lies that we were told.'

My favorite line.

Nice flow to the story. You're an amazing writer!
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
I love anything that has to do with the ocean or anything nautical, so I really enjoyed this. The emotion in this is tangible; I could feel the sorrow of the speaker. The only flaw of this poem that I noticed was with the rhyme (or lack thereof) of the first two lines. Other than that minor thing, this was well done. Keep writing!