Reviews for To Dad
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
I'm not sure what to say about this one. I'm gettin kinda sick of the usuall ccol, great job, I like it, blah, blah, blah. I don't have a dad... Um, w/e, Great job on this. It's nicely written. Keep it up!
Dying Rose chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
This is a very powerful poem. It struck me as I read it - I can relate so well to these feelings. It's almost like you wrote my thoughts, which is slightly creepy, but extremely cool. I absolutely love the formatting on this poem - every line is strung out perfectly, adding exact and careful emphasis where it's needed. From the accusations at the beginning to the questions in the middle, and then the final, harshly beautiful line - "Congratulations, you've succeeded" - the flow is wonderful. You've written an incredible poem here. Keep up the awesome work!

Best wishes,

Ashley
Coco Kintner chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
I'm sorry you struggle with your dad. I know the feeling... my dad isn't the great person ever either. It's like with a single sentence he can tear apart your entire emotional being... great poem.