Reviews for Offer the Sky
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
My favorite part was the end actually-the word "silky" really conjures up a type of guy. I've always really liked your ability to use cadence stunningly, both in your poetry and prose and this is agood example of it.
classic violet chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Wonderfully written! Amazing!

I love the title, thats just so beautiful.
utopiadominator chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Crap loved it till i found out that he Lied.
midnight skies are scarlet red chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Quite clever actually. The end screamed at me. I enjoyed it.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
oh this is really good, but really sad, it made me tear up at the end because it reminds me of so many people that i know and well it's hard to think of friends like that... i really liked the wilted boquet/flowers stuff it really brought home that while you're not perfect you're better then the other guy which i think is great, i love it, thank you so much for sharing
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
ohh.. like the progression- the beginning was "happy" and the end was more haunting and mournful