Reviews for The Future isn't so Bright
DiamondKing chapter 9 . 3/13/2007
Well, I like this chapter basically because we get to hear the story from Yuu's perspective. Telling a story from different perspectives is a very useful and intricate tool; you have to be careful how you use it so there is no lack of realism. But you did good. I can't wait for an update!

DiamondKing
DiamondKing chapter 7 . 3/13/2007
Hehe, Yuu is odd like I said before, but amusing as well. Poor Miku...bwahahah! I'm worried that I might sound like a broken record: good job. I'm curious about what's happening with Kami (as I'm sure everyone is). I can't think of too much to say right now, other than what I just did say. Gah, I'm the brainless wonder, aren't I?

DiamondKing
DiamondKing chapter 5 . 3/13/2007
I find myself hooked to this story. Seriously, there's always something interesting or new to ponder or speculate about. I can't wait to read more.

DiamondKing
DiamondKing chapter 4 . 3/13/2007
Well, Yuu seems quite...odd. In an interesting sort of way. And I just realized what the title of the last chapter was referring to; very clever. Good work on this chapter guys!

DiamondKing
DiamondKing chapter 3 . 3/13/2007
Kamisuki is so funny; he makes me laugh. He's so serious, but he reminds me of someone I know. Good chapter, nothing for me to really mention or complain about. Good work!

DiamondKing
DiamondKing chapter 2 . 3/13/2007
Interesting. Ok, so I'm not too wordy when it comes to my reviews (sorry ) but I really like the style of writing and the plot. I'm really into the story, so good job! What's going to happen next, I wonder.

DiamondKing
DiamondKing chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
I'm so*six hours later*o sorry that I hadn't had a chance to review your story yet, but I've finally got a chance now _. I like it so far; the idea itself is interesting, but so are the characters -hugs Kamisuki-. I can't wait to read more and, lucky me, I don't since I've got eight more chapters to read! Hehe.

DiamondKing
Noihseret chapter 9 . 1/12/2007
aww, Yuu is so cute when he's in love
cariella chapter 9 . 1/10/2007
Wow, this is getting even more fun to read. thanx
angel-Janna chapter 9 . 1/1/2007
Konbamwa! well done you guys, this is really picking up pace. I need more! the characters are well structured and the vocab is great! Wanna know why poor Kami keeps losing his gift... wanna know if Yuu gets his man... wanna know what Miku thinks of all that! and whether the other two EVER find out whats going on with Kami! hehehehehehehe great! anyway... keep it up *hugs* Janna x
Eric Lupin chapter 9 . 12/8/2006
Hey Erik! Great to see you back! :) Plus, writing fantastic new additions to an already fantastic story! I can't believe Yuu's going to declare his love for Mikuchi! Kamisuki might seem a bit down, but I reckon it's only 'cause he's jealous. I can't wait to see who gets paired off! I do love it when characters first get together! It's really sweet! It makes me wish I was there just so that I could wish them luck! I hope their parents are ok with them dating guys, but if not I'm sure they'll still pull through! All the best to them! ;)

Eric
ainedamdz chapter 9 . 12/8/2006
oh, such a sweet, short chapter. mm... lol, for a minute there i thought yuu liked kami.. guess not. maybe kami is jealous, hm? can't wait for your next update!
Derek57 chapter 8 . 11/19/2006
Can't believe I missed the update...WAY TO GO ERIK!
Eric Lupin chapter 6 . 11/8/2006
Oh no! Poor Kami! He's such a sweet little lad, too! Bless his pshycic heart! I wonder what brought on his sudden, uh, spasm type thing! Ooh, I can't wait to find out! This is so cool!

Eric
Eric Lupin chapter 5 . 11/8/2006
Aww! This is awesome! ! !

I agree, the descriptions are really great!

Plus, the storyline gets more and more interesting each time! I hope Kamisuke isn't losing his 'vista'; it's such a cool talent!

Oh, and I thought the whole idea for the name Crysos was amazing! I have a realy thing for names with a story behind them, or a meaning!

Keep up the great work, both of you!

Eric

x

P.S. Sorry that I didn't reply sooner! Once again, I thought you were on my alerts, but apparently not! I'm ading you NOW! Lol, to all my lists in one go! (checks boxes) Finally got my act together!
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