Reviews for One Word
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
This poem flows very well, and the rhymes are good. You carried the theme of "one word" very nicely throughout this, the repetition strengthened the theme a lot more. Well written in general. The emotion portrayed in this was strong and well-represented.

And if this is a true story about your life, then I'm very sorry, and I do hope that you and your dad may be able to improve your relationship. But writing it in poetry is a very good way to let out feelings, and it also gives hope and helps others who may have the same problem.