Reviews for UNHOLLOW
lookingwest chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
a litlle lengthy, but otherwise good. it had strong use of feeling, you really got your point across. well done.
msdewey chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
I like this (even though it's really wordy *L*) I think it could be a little less cluttered and be even better. I really like the imagry at the end, the weather/rain and coins. Really nice work.