Reviews for My Mind Is A Total Blank
bitterosemary chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
I liked the vagueness of this poem, and the simple words and simple thoughts that make it up into something not very simple. As for constructive criticism, I realise that it's supposed to jump from conclusion to conclusion, but I still think it could use some polishing in that area - perhaps more parallels. Good job, however. I especially liked the transition of "I dropped my soap; it came back furry and snarling."