Reviews for Questions
Theallpowerfull chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
The answers are but more questions. The more you learn the more you have to question. I enjoyed this poem, despite the blunt style which resembles my own.

There are some grammatical errors (actually, you just pluralised some words such as moves, forwards and makes unnecessarily.)You should take one piece of advice that I sometimes avoid listening to. Use commas and periods, even in your poetry. It's important in helping people read it correctly. Feel free to break the rules, but on purpose.

-Theallpowerfull
rira-chan chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
wow this one was so good! _ i loved it! good ending too!

rira-chan