Reviews for Crying
AlexdR chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
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RobHemmens chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
It's got a nice feel to it. Well, not a *nice* feel, but it portrays the mood well (to put it in a more pretentious light).

My one criticism is that I think the two lines that are three syllables interrupt the rhythm of the piece a litte, as all the others are two. A minor point though...
rira-chan chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
_ yet again i can relate to your work. great job. it had a lovely flow to it!

~rira-chan