Reviews for Mall of Broken Hearts |
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![]() ![]() Would you laugh at me if I told you I actually searched the name Jared Felix up on Google? XP It'd look really funny if someone was making out with a ghost. People would be like, HOLY SHIT. She's frenching the air! Haha, but I loved it. D Loved the story, loved the way you wrote it, loved Dean, loved Jared, loved STAPH!, loved everything. |
![]() ![]() your writing is truly inspirational and its heart breaking which makes it unreal. its lovely. |
![]() ![]() OMG. I love that. Its amazing how the ghosts of the past can help more than haunt. You're an awesome writer, by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, this is a really good story. If you ever did want to continue it I have no doubt it could turn into an amazing story. BUT, you have others your working on and a life, neither should be neglected, your life above all. So anyway great story I really liked it! Haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Written well...it's been done before but it has it's own uniqueness to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! That is an amazing peice of writing. That touched me so deeply. Awesome job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic, i loved it! Gorgeous writing and really good ending. It give me a jump, it was unexpected. Is that why people were laughing at her in the mall because they couldn't see Jared? Very nice, what was the other ending? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You nearly made me cry. :( So sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. |