|Reviews for Predator|
| Death Princess chapter 23 . 12/23/2009
there's a word for that...intense. i loved that feesho yupyup.
| Jaliy chapter 23 . 12/23/2009
interesting chapter..though it was a bit vague in the starting..
but good job anyway!
| scattered-strings chapter 23 . 12/23/2009
Damn, that was intense. It took my breath away and the relationship Angel has with everyone is complex, especially with Scythe.
But I'm confused, what happened to Rayth? For a moment, i thought he was dead and the next moment, he was talking and then you killed him off.
The cliffhanger was going to drive me crazy. I love your work, its so disturbingly beautiful.
Reality has taken a toll mentally and emotionally on me as well.
| renegade01 chapter 23 . 12/23/2009
damn, that was amazing.
| Claes Winterspell chapter 23 . 12/23/2009
heh, in a way she instigated the fight. I mean, she bolted first; of course he'd run after her! Then she just had to go after the axe! A crate would have been better; then he'd just go unconscious and, luckily, suffer from amnesia! I noticed that Scythe was basically copying whatever She did O.O it's seriously just like a game for him, like Angel was ahead of the course and he's a few steps behind cuz he's losing and had to jump when she jumped and run when she ran cause it's the same obstacles..hm... well, one thing's for sure: I have to re-read this all over again. I was greatly confused by the first part haha.
O holy cow! Rayth's dead? I just remembered/realized I thought the kid died cuz there was some mentioning of a kid/child *sigh* definitely reading everything all over again. I'm all confused and bug eyed.
Cancer's really playing the hero part to a T, huh? he's got the awesomely-perfect-timing worked out and gosh, I've forgotten how they've all looked like..Anyway, great update; your style somewhat changed(to me) because of the multiple adjectives and increased metaphors. I bet your (tons & tons) of fans just got the most awesome Christmas gift ever- that includes me by the way. Well, second best gift for me. Thanks for the update! Now that I've got my fix no hurries on the next chapter :D
P.S. Sorry if the comments are messed up; I'm no longer used to reviewing haha
| grassong chapter 23 . 12/22/2009
i actually forgot about this story, and what happened... but
seriously. oh my gosh. this chapter? AMAZING. im in a daze.
literally. no joke. o_o
wow. so amazing. oh my gosh.
ugh. makes me want to reread it so i can remember what happened before this. ugh. if the next chapter's the last one, then im pretty sure im gonna feel really empty, if you know what i mean. but yes, thanks so much for your chapters so far. it was really awesome, and this story is too. ugh. this chapter was so amazing!
| laughing moon chapter 23 . 12/22/2009
i think the chapter was good over all but im alittle confused on the beginning... did rayth shoot himself?
| Scribblesandink chapter 23 . 12/22/2009
Wow, it's been so long! I definitely need to do a reread of this. No one really turned out to be who I thought, but thanks for the new chapter! I'll be looking forward to the next one!
| mistariapotter chapter 23 . 12/22/2009
YES, UPDATE FINALLY! what happened to rayth tho? its like all of a sudden he's dead and his body hangs limply or smthg. and i kind of really loved Scythe until this chapter. haha GREAT JOB! UPDATE SOON! :]
| waterlilies52 chapter 23 . 12/22/2009
Oh my. Sends shivers down my spine...
I'll be waiting anxiously for the next update!
| l'heautontimoroumenos chapter 23 . 12/22/2009
dum da da dum dum da da dum...
Cliffhanger. I really do hate them. You better update soon or I fear my hatred of cliffhangers is bound to grow into a ginormous thing. This chapter was really great. Nearly worth the one-year pause... (nearly, key word)
| munchabun chapter 22 . 12/20/2009
This story is wonderfully written. The plot is absolutely beautiful, and so are the ideas that have been created on the way. You did such a good job and there wasn't one moment where I wasn't mystified or interested. There is one thing that I don't get, though. I've read the last chapter God knows how many times, and quiet frankly I still don't understand it. My mind barely held the meaning to it and the reasons for everything and the only part I got was the lighthouse where Raythe and Angel were. Then when Angel got pushed off the cliff and Cancer saved her..That part confused me. What was with Raythe and the butterfly in the jar? The gun? How did he get a hold of it? Most importantly, why did he say 'What have you done?' before he shot them?
Of course you don't have to answer all of those questions, but I am curious about why Raythe had said those four words and why he shot them with Carion's (I think that was his name, am I right? Or somewhere close?) gun.
All in all, beautiful story m'dear.
| Lovlymotion108 chapter 22 . 12/19/2009
Hey, just wanna say that I adore this story! It's original and interesting. I especially liked the cryptic messages at the end, and I'm hopeing you'll post the last chapters soon so we'll know how it ends!
| intoxthexmystic chapter 4 . 11/5/2009
am i the only one who is confused?
| Reader666 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
This first chapter blew me away. The exquisite detail, the characterization that fit so well with the kids...
Beautiful. You really know how to write a cliffhanger.
Reading stories like this online makes me grin like an idiot.
Never stop writing!