Reviews for Predator
alittleglikecupcake chapter 22 . 10/28/2009
Wow. I mean just, wow. It takes my breath away. I love the way it is written, beautiful. Complex, disturbing, that little bit of romance. Good job.
choc me chapter 22 . 10/19/2009
What a's been almost a year since u last updated!
choc me chapter 18 . 10/19/2009
choc me chapter 17 . 10/19/2009
I found ur story a few days ago...well the summary drew me in. It's very well-written and planned, intriguing and creepy, scary and I'm unhealthily drawn to it.

I've disliked Sycthe from the beginning but I thought Rayth was cool, until the previous chapter. It's frustrating how Angela lets them walk over her and treat her like dirt at times...And I can't believe they tried to hurt her like that - how twisted...But I guess that makes her more fleshed out. She's got her personality and her flaws..Still not sure what to make of Cancer...

hm one thing I found odd though and that's the latest diary entry. The girl writes it like an actual story - it doesnt sound like something someone would write in a diary...(just my opinion)
Waffle Rocket chapter 22 . 10/16/2009
Ohmygod. It's been nearly a year since you've updated.


Seriously, ohmygod. Do something about this! I LOVE this. It's been ages since I've read this chapter, and I'm not sure if I left a review for it before, and normally I'd leave a really long play-by-play kinda review like I did for the last few chapters, but it's been ages, and I barely remember what happened in this chapter, let alone in each individual chapter of the whole story. I plan to read the whole thing over, and maybe then I'll leave an organized review.

But until then, I shall just content myself with bugging you about updating. Because really, I'm going crazy wanting to know how it's going to end. Same thing with Her Ashes, just to a lesser degree. I'm just going so crazy. I wish you'd finish this soon.

I understand you're probably extremely busy, and that's why you haven't updated in a while. And I'm sorry for pushing this, but REALLY. Your readers are all practically shitting their pants waiting to figure out what's going to happen next.

I am dead serious. They probably are. I know I am.

So yes. I hope you're doing well, wherever you are, whatever you're doing. I hope all is well, I read the note about Oxford, I hope you got in. O: And I really hope you'll come back sometime soon and make your readers happy and finish up Predator.

I don't know if I've told you, but I think you're an absolutely amazing writer, and I wish I could do something as intricate and beautiful as Predator or Catharsis. All of your stories are absolutely beautiful, but I think those two are my absolute favourite. Maybe because of the presence of pretty psychotic males. I love Cancer. Absolutely love him. And for some reason, Rayth as well. Scythe pisses me off, but I guess that's just the way it is in stories, there has to be at least one character that gets on your nerves, elsewise it's not realistic.

Jez, rant is now over. Wait, no, not completely over. It's ALMOST over. Please, please, PLEASE do finish this. I'll love you forever if you finish this sometime before my death (which I hope isn't for quite a few years to come, but you never know.)

Do what you have to do. Don't rush yourself. Just. I want to know that you will finish this someday. Hope you're doing well, once again.

Rant over NOW.

-Winged Kitty.
Jaliy chapter 22 . 10/14/2009
This is an Awesome story..I loved it!

please try finishing it...

update soon!

OutOfStyle879 chapter 22 . 9/28/2009
absolutely LOVE this story..LOVE everything about it...i am huge fan! and the suspense is killing me!... hopefully you come back to this and put the ending up for us! i know ill be checking every day!
Ember Black chapter 22 . 8/15/2009
Is there still an epilogue coming? It ends rather abruptly and I'd really love to know what happens.

Great story by the way.

Still like Cancer, feel sorry for Scythe, and not sure about Rayth.

~Ember Black
Ember Black chapter 18 . 8/15/2009
I just wanna say this before I read anymore... I like cancer! I think he's a pretty much okay guy, sorta kinda. More so than Scythe, though I liked him a bit in the beginning. Actually, in the very beginning, i liked Rayth...I guess i can't make up my mind, but I'm pretty sure that I just like Cancer right now.

Anyways, enough rambling.

Good story!

~Ember Black
sugahhdrmzmakelurvve chapter 22 . 8/12/2009
What's with the "its either you or scythe* part? So either angela or scythe has to die for their parent's sins?
B.Goddess chapter 22 . 8/11/2009
Nu. Don't stop there! Write write write. This story is wonderful. So deep. And confusing, lol. The characters come off the page and the plot is so different.

TheWorldIsOurs chapter 22 . 8/5/2009
love the story

cant wait for the next chapter
LIPS chapter 22 . 8/2/2009
Sorrysorrysorrysorry to bother you again, but I think perhaps I noticed something. (perhaps-perhaps) Scythe's real name is Anthony, and the "little girl"/Angela's sister calls him Ant. In the flashbacks, it seems like Rayth (although I'm not sure about this, yousee) likes drowning/killing ants. I wonder if this is intentional foreshadowing, or just a coincidence. If it's foreshadowing, you're brilliant. If not, you're still brilliant.

lol, yeah. That's all I got. Eheh.

Anyway, can't wait for more! XD I love this story to p-i-e-c-e-s.
Paper Kisses and Red Boats chapter 22 . 6/27/2009
Gotta love a good horror story to keep your nightmares vivid :D

Cant wait for the last chapter and the epilogue. :)
AndItMovesUsAll chapter 22 . 6/26/2009
Wow i loved that ending, it was intense! Although, im still not clear on a few things: i see how Cancer and his father are connected but why did the twins warn her away from him, and i dont know if im just being stupid here but im still unclear as to whos the consumer and producer and what the 'rules' are, why did they all band together like that?

But that was brilliant though, you really had me thinking over the heaven/hell, good/evil thing.
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