Reviews for Predator
We Used To Wait chapter 2 . 3/7/2009
God damn, i love this story. The Rayth and Scythe are so intriguing. I love characters like that. Just like your other stories. creepi. hehehehehe
renegade01 chapter 22 . 3/3/2009
Hey, love the story, even though i'm still a little confused! But that'll probably clear up by the time you get to the end... :) I keep wavering between who I think the bad guy is...ah well.
We Used To Wait chapter 22 . 2/7/2009
I miss Scythe...

and what happened to the butterfly? did it die yet?

Man, I miss Scythe.

Update so, Soon.
We Used To Wait chapter 21 . 2/7/2009
So that's why she didn't feel anything when their friendship was deteriorating. She didn't feel anything for Scythe, only for herself. She felt so guilty that she didn't want to face the damage she might have done. She repressed her feelings and so it all came up blank. Ooh, how sad.

My favourite part was when Rayth told her she was doing it for herself. Except I really don't know what to believe anymore, about what she feels. She's like an unreliable narrator. Keeps lying to herself. It pains me to see Rayth and Scythe going into pain as well. (unless their masochists and they like this P)

I love you and your story. e.
We Used To Wait chapter 20 . 2/7/2009
I loved how you wrote, "sirens still wailed a requiem." That was probably my most favourite line that chapter. And I've been trying forever to do some psychoanalysis on Scythe (who's name I love by the way, and his twin), but so far I've ended up with zilch. Mer. e.

I cried, you know. It was depressing. I didn't want to be reminded of that feeling, but your words are so strong it's impossible. And it's a starless night outside.

Love your story.

It's one of my favourites in my bookmarks.
Twist Their Emotions chapter 3 . 2/6/2009
Great detail.
Twist Their Emotions chapter 2 . 2/6/2009
Fantastic dialogue. This is extremely intriguing.
Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Sammy chapter 22 . 2/4/2009
Hey! Congrats on getting into oxford! I've actually got a place there for P. It would be an amazing coincidence if you did too. What course did you get into?
SyMph0Ny Of cOloRS chapter 22 . 2/3/2009
I can't wait for this story to end so everything will all be explained! Lol. I do like the suspense though even though its killing me. Let me live Kitty, let me live.
YoursMarilyn chapter 22 . 2/2/2009
i really like this. a lot. but i'm rather confused. The predator is cancer right? and then consumer is scythe. and the producer is rayth. where does cancer and his father come into play? real confused but loved it anyways! hope to read the last chapter and the epilogue.
patheticyy chapter 22 . 1/27/2009
oh dear.

uber ebil.

&&. i love yhur stufs.

I wish I had yuhr talent. well. and improve on it, mwahahah. 3

and then id be a suck up and say that i cant find any mistakes to improve on.

but of course.

since i'm so bad at writing and such, i refuse to give criticism.

as if i can criticize writing anyway.
whisperingxblue chapter 22 . 1/20/2009
The One And Only Charcoal chapter 22 . 1/13/2009
Whoa. That's intense. And creepy. And depressing. And amazingly AWESOME! This whole story is one HUGEE twisty thingy! How did you come up with all these plot twists? Incredibly creative, well revised, and you don't make any of the twists contradict! Absolutely wonderful story. Five stars!
slideshow chapter 22 . 1/8/2009
im sitting here with a face mask on, having a jolly good time reading. mm m mm mm love the story about all of them. half siblings ! thats cool as all hell.

props, naff, props. this chapter was sick :)

no wonder you got into oxford you sly dog you. well congrats about that as well. if i were in london, i'd throw you a party. we would be party pals.


we yes, favorite part was the discovery of them being half sibs. that was clever. i liked that. and i like how this story isnt one of absolutely insanely complete rubbish stories floating around fictionpress where the stupid silly girl has to choose between which twin she likes the most.

-massive eye roll-


but youre not naff. nope. i can always count on you, ol buddy ol pal.

lav u.
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