Reviews for Predator
Duuude chapter 3 . 10/4/2008
Oh no you didn't! You did NOT diss my name! You and some other reviewer, that is.l *attacks*


My name's Angela. So it's very weird to find a character with my name.

I think Scythe is strange. Rayth, surprisingly, is more normal than him. Isn't that weird?

But seriously though, where'd that come from? When he went off at her in the end... how strange.

He really is scared of hell, isn't he?

Anyway, from eavesdropping on your reviews, I learned that you were Muslim..? So yeah, nice story. And salamu alaikum! )

It's funny how they have such regular names like Anthony and Herbert and they call themselves Scythe and Rayth. Haha.

I like this. I'll continue reading it.

And the ending is especially nice. I love how it's written, the last chapter's one was really good. This one too.

The predator sounds scary. Ooh. o_O
bleeding WHERE chapter 21 . 10/3/2008

Haha just kidding. but seriously i havent reviewed this chap yet.

this review is to let you know i will review soon!

its a memo for you and me


by your bestest best friend kellmyster. teehee.
insatiablehunger89 chapter 21 . 10/2/2008
not to be rude or anything, but when are you going to post the next chapter? this story is amazing and I've never read anything like it.
The Dumbing Down Of Love chapter 21 . 9/22/2008
I love you, you're a genius. I love the Stephen King-esque bracket thing. And just your writing in general. You don't find all that many good horror stories around that aren't...sci-fi or supernatural...

Update soon?

- Saranya.
midnightxskiesxx chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
okay i'm going to probably sound like an obssessed fan but i guess i am D i write alot of stuff but it's no way near as good as anything you have.

how long have you een writing for because your style is so...elaborate, i love it D

is there any sort of fantay woven into it at the end? there a meaning to the whole 'angels fall into hell' or whatever or is that just basically playing on angela's nickname?

is bones basically about scythe wanting to kill all the rats 'cause of what happened when he was 9? you know how he has piipa in a cage, did he kill lynn and he's gonna kill her aswell?

your story is so complex and cryptic but its so awesome. is cancer gonna really be a bad guy 'cause that's how all the other character's make him out to be. i reckon rayth is evil gr. and scythe tryed to rape her and she forgave him.

you make the coolest but most twisted characters. okay, now i'm ranting D haha,

okay, writing styles: what influences you; how do you get your ideas; music?; and...what would you suggest for potential writers who are 4 years above everyone in her class? (not bragging but thats what -literally- my english teacher said)

you have all right to be scared of me, people who havn't met me are D but you are awesome and i hope one day you release books and then i shall stalk you and be like: i love your stories. haha

louise xx
jellyandjam chapter 21 . 8/24/2008
wow, what an amazing chapter. An amazing story overall to be honest. I can't wait for the next chapter. (:
sunsetting chapter 21 . 8/18/2008
this leaves me so hot & bothered.

jkjk, but really. I love this story so much. I've just been rereading some of your stuff (catharsis, this, her ashes... I'll review later when I'm feeling less lazy :x) & I think I'm in love with your writing style, for serious. your wording win status. -awe-

sometimes, angela annoys me.. her supposed/apparent naivete trusting, I guess. (but sometimes, she's something else altogether: / "Funny," I mused. "We talk a hell of a lot more now you're dead." / ) and rayth... woah. I guess it sort of makes sense, though. well, I feel like an idiot for reviewing this late into the story, and I'm sort of not really up to psychoanalyzing 21 chapters into one review ('cause let's admit it: I'm not gonna get it all in one review), but lsjfgdlkgjdklg.

I'm so looking forward to your last few chapters.
Nighttime Blues chapter 21 . 8/16/2008
I love this story. Like, seriously love it.
Dances-With-Pen chapter 21 . 8/6/2008
Wow, this stuff is deep, but there is so much I don't understand. I still don't understand what Bones actually is, and why exactly Scythe does it. I figure he's trying to either cover up something or search for redemption. I still have no clue what Angel did to deserve all this bad stuff. I know she's some kind of catalyst, but what did she actually do? I know the rats are connected with what happened when Scythe's dad took him, but gosh I feel so dumb. This story really makes you think. I really think this story is an enigma, and in my head, I see it as a movie. In the end, if people are still confused, make an FAQ or something.

I can't wait until the next chapter. I love Cancer-though he freaks me out a little but not as much as Scythe.
Queen Kat Food chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
So...I started reading this ages ago, then stopped. But I stumbled back, and pretty glad that I did. After an intense marathon of mega-reading I am all caught up, and super excited for what's to come. And I had a bundle of questions during my marathon, but I forgot most of them...and I am sure a good amount were answered.

Sometimes Angel frustrates me, she's just too trusting, but then again 8 years is a long time...and I guess if everything I knew were falling apart I would also cling to any semblance of hope. Well I am excited to see what happens next, and if Angel does any butt kicking...that would be interesting, not that it isn't interesting already.
Adithena and Kathyana chapter 21 . 7/31/2008
Wahh! Your story had me hooked the momment I finished the first chapter. I actually spent my whole day reading all twenty-one chapters of your story. Hehe, a bit obsessive, but it was too good to put down!

This is a bit random but, the whole family-connection-drama thing kinda confuses me. XD

I guess Eleanor has some kind of connection with the Butchers, seeing as they had her diary stuffed in their attic.

The Dad & Mom drama is hard to follow, but I bet everything will be cleared in the last two chapters. ;]

One random last thing, Rayth is so ICK now. [

He used to be my favorite character in the beggining!

I kinda of understand his attitude towards the end. I suppose he wanted Angela and Cancer to keep their distance. & He was a bit pissed that his house got burned down and took it out of Angela seeing as she's the closest to Cancer...I think. Oh well, I'll find out soon. XD

I can't wait 'till you update!~ (Haha, it ryhmed.)

i-rite-gud chapter 21 . 7/31/2008
WOW. Well then. This story gets more confusing all the time! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT? Why would Angel want to help Scythe after he tried to rape her? I think that's when I would call the police and be like "uhm. I think my friend went crazy... He tried to rape me and issues from his past make him do really weird things... I think he needs a therapist or something." I still have pretty much no idea what's going on or how things are linked. I'm thinking that Angel's mom and Scythe's dad got it on and had Lou, and hence the hatred. I'm just not sure how Cancer fits into the picture... :S I'm sure it'll all make sense when everything's wrapped up! I can't wait until you update again! Hopefully it won't take over half a year this time *raises eyebrow* lol OH bytheway. It's smelled, not smelt. To smelt is to weld metal together, to have smelled is... well I think you know what smelling is:P lmao. Anyways again, LOVED IT and I can't wait until you update so I can finally figure out what's going on! It's like everyone's wearing a mask and all the links between everyone and the causes of their actions are hidden away and I'm SO excited for when the masks come off and links and motives are revealed! YAY. lol PLEASE UPDATE SON! :D
heart shaped lies chapter 21 . 7/30/2008
Happy Birthday! )

I loved every bit of it. It has been seven months but your chappies are as enthralling as ever! I'm on the edge now and I'll kill you if you don't update after that cliffy! That would be..cruel. It looks like things are going to clear up any minute and I can't wait to find out what it is all about. Update soon please!
Emerald123 chapter 21 . 7/24/2008
i will only vote u 4 SKOW if u finish this story in the next 2 months. im NOT going to wait another two years...please?
J.C. Lyn chapter 21 . 7/22/2008
I'm glad the words do.

I wouldn't actually mind living in the area they live in; the beach, snow and lighthouse. At least I know Scythe is alive - it makes me wonder if Angel's mum had an affair with the twin's father or something.

It's sad how I start reading this story when it's nearing its end. Congrats for the nomination.
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