Reviews for Predator
Mandy40 chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Hey, I just found this story and I love it. I read it all in one sitting. I keep checking back for updates!
Waffle Rocket chapter 19 . 1/19/2008
Oh my God.. Haha, I'm late. Heck.. Story's starting to scare me. And I read this twice.. Because I didn't get where the first part really fit in.. Scythe? Is that him praying there? Kind of weird.. Doesn't seem like the guy to pray, but at eight years old..

Yup, forgiven. For taking a while. Love the story and hard to blame ya for taking ages. Hehe. And the new chapters are the apology. So yay.

Wowness.. I don't think I'd be able to really define life or dead. And Angela kinda lost me with the.. um.. Eck. Pretending people are dead to help someone through the pain of knowing they're alive but not there. Hah, if that made any sense.

"How do you define a dead person, Angel?" Gasp. Cancer stole Scythe's nickname for her. -Points at Cancer- Name thief.

I think I'm just starting to get the whole Predator, Producer and Consumer thing. How many people began to get it before me? I feel so very late.. And dumb. I'll blame it on you. You've confused me. But you cleared some things up in this chapter.. Yay.

Fire. Fire and.. Matches. Hmphers, it was all the Consumer. He burnt the house down. I could almost bet on it. But hey.. I can't believe the house is gone. First Lynn and now her house. Someone's out to get them. I feel more sorry for the house. Because... Um.. I don't know. I feel closer to the house? Maybe the whole situation.. How Angela just stands there, remembering everything that happened there.. As if the house held more importance in her memory than Lynn. Or she can accept it more easily. She's more in shock over Lynn maybe..

Scythe is gone because HE attacked the house. Him and his match. Consumer.. Scythe.. That's why he's missing. Yup. All his fault. That's what happens when you go around burning down houses. And.. Crap, I forgot all about Pippa.

Well, heck... Huge definition for life. My definition: The thingy that makes people breathe and move and thing... Y'all don't know what I'm talking about?

Eck.. As for the request.. I can't think of any questions I have. Jeez, just like me. I don't get the bones thing.. And I don't really see what Cancer's all about, but I'm pretty sure that's gonna be tied up.. Same thing with the little kid that helped her out.. Um.. What happened in the bug house? What happened to her dad? What was that Scythe's dad said about her mother and her dad and.. Eck. Something about her mom shaping her way of thinking.. and saying her father's not dead in the real world. What's with Scythe and Rayth's dad? Does Angela have some kinda problem with her sister or something? What the HELL is her mom's problem? Does Scythe and Rayth's mom really only hate her because she cut the wires? Hmm.. HEY! Did he ask her to cut the wires so that he could take Scythe wherever the hell he took him? Jez...

That's about all that I can think of.. Hehe. And most of them aren't even good questions.. -Inspects- No, they all pretty much suck. So, yeah. Ooh, and they don't make much sense.

Welcome back. We've missed you. Thanks for the chapter and update soon.

Winged Kitty.
katieee chapter 19 . 1/18/2008
:] I really like this. Like, a lot a lot.

Unanswered questiosn.

Where's Angela's father.

Why did they start playing bones.

Why does Angela call her little sister 'little girl' or something when thinking about her.

Why is Angela's mother so mean to her.

Umm, :]

THat's all.
katieee chapter 11 . 1/16/2008
No. I love Cancer! Why does she alwasy have to leave himm. [
katieee chapter 10 . 1/16/2008
Cancer's my fav.

Ad the Predator's Cancer. While the Consumer's that Rsghskjg man. And he's the one who was walking with Pippa.

Those are my assumptions.
katieee chapter 9 . 1/16/2008
I love Cancer. :]

I really dislike Rayth now.

And Anthony's. . .okay.



I like this.

katieee chapter 7 . 1/16/2008
Oh I love Cancer. Adn then . . .harvey? or whatever the r mans name is. I cant remember how to spell it. :}
katieee chapter 3 . 1/16/2008
I like Rayth. :]

I really wouldn't want to be friends with Scythe. He seems really rude. Why would she want to deal with that everyday?
katieee chapter 2 . 1/16/2008
8] I like her. She's funny.

Whoa. The note thing at the bottoms freaky.
katieee chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
I really like this. I've been procrastinating on reading this story for ages. So, I've decided to start.

I like to choose my favourite line in stories. So far, I like 'i'm a disease.' I might tell that to someone.


i-rite-gud chapter 19 . 1/16/2008
This story is totally amazing! I'm in love with it and I can't stop reading. You're an amazing author.


-Who are Producer, Predator, and Consumer? What ARE they doing? What's with all their rules?

-Who were the guys dressed in black with Scythe, when Scythe killed Tyson?

-Who's the little dude with the knife and why does he seem to be old and young at the same time?

-Is the world actually made out of broccoli?

-Why did the little dude have a gun at one point?

-Why doesn't Angela love Lou and is she even Angela's sister?

-Why does Scythe dote on Lou?

-Is the sun a massive ball of liquid cheese, just waiting to be spread over the broccoli earth?

-Why did Scythe try to rape Angela?

-Why does everyone (the little dude and Rayth at least) seem to hate Cancer and want Angela to stay away from him?

-Who kissed Angela in the rain that one time?

-Did the idea for the tux come from penguins?

-What's the deal with Angela's dad?

-Still not entirely clear on what happened with Scythe and his dad.

-What the hell is Bones, how did it start up, and why would Angela and Rayth go if they weren't going to participate?

-Why are hearts shaped like when they actually look SO different inside your body?

-Who killed Lynn and why?

-Is Scythe actually dead?

-Is Cancer telling the truth about Eleanor?

-What relevance does Eleanor have to the story? Is Cancer a decendant of hers or something?

-Why do people say emotions come from the heart when they technically come from your brain? Love and logic come from the same place (your brain) so couldn't a brainiac technically be considered a very emotional person?

-Why didn't Angela ever tell Scythe that she went to the lighthouse? Didn't she go to the lighthouse to prove something to Scythe in the first place?

-Why does Cancer keep running back to Abe?

-Why did Cancer randomly apologize to Angela on the rooftop without letting Angela say anything? Did he find out about what happened with Rayth and Scythe? If he did, then how?

-Why doesn't anyone ever use the olive green crayon? It's just as good as all the other crayons.

-insert cheesy narrator voice here-

All these questions and more, answered next week on -insert cheesy TV show name here-!

heh. heh. heh. sorry, I'm a bit bored. I've been stuck alone inside my house all week with strep throat. woot. woot. hope you don't mind my lack of a life and my overabundance of questions :D

ANYWAYS. I've loved the story so far and I can't wait until you update!
Death Princess chapter 19 . 1/10/2008
ew, your ugly. get off the goddamn phone so i can talk to you hobo.
Silent Dreamer chapter 19 . 1/9/2008
Wow, what a headtrip. I'm reading this while staying up late and it's totally messed with my mind. Loving it and hoping for more! One good thing about read this while half asleep is that you're half dreaming it and everything is so vivid in the mind, picture of the beach, the lighthouse, all so hazy and clear.
heart shaped lies chapter 19 . 1/8/2008
i couldnt get enough of this chapter! rayth sounds like, the uber-cool super-quiet ice-cold mastermind after this chap...and poor scythe. i feel like hugging him. i think he totally needs a hug :/

and questions? well, the prev reviews pretty much cover everything ive wanted to ask except this:

the wall scythe took angela to...where he wrote 'once upon a time there was a girl kalled angel' or something and asked her to continue the that important and does it have anything to do with the plot?

yup. thats all. im done D
Tomoka chapter 19 . 1/8/2008
I've never read a story this intriguing, it freaks me out a little and the whole thing with the Preadator, the Consumer and the Producer makes me wonder many things. This story is sending me crazy with its secrets and thus I am undeniably hooked and will keep on stalking it until it is finished.

Bones seems like some sort of strange ritual, I'm not quite clear on what it's supposed to do... yeah, I find that freaky too.

I really want to know how you came up with this sort of idea, it freaks me out. The cat part really put me on edge _ freakin hell I was in shock horror, seriously.

All I can really say about the characters is that something very very wrong is going on here and not knowing what it is scares me senseless (Yes, i get creeped out really easily, also doesn't help that I'm listening the sort of music sung about Lord God and things, like by those choirs).

The little boy is also confusing me, who is he? I really want to find out, he's a freaky boy...

(I'm starting to shiver now, contemplating everything _ )

So many loose ends I wish to be tied
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