I love this story.

I wish I could figure out who the Predator, Producer, and Consumer are.

At firts i though Rayth was the Predator. Cancer the Producer and Scythe the Consumer.

But now it seems like her Dad's part of it.

I'm so lost. But i love the story so much.

Keep up the amazing work.

holy crap, your writing has improved over the years. makes me jealous. i don't know if you remember me or not but my old account was ~j0zz. im the twelve year old who wrote all those stories xD i think it was around the time where you were working on Hunter. im currently 15 now and i havent written for all these years until now. and i uh pretty much suck. well anyway id like to read a romantic/humor story from you so please consider my request :D

*stares in gaping silence*

O.O

*mouth slowly forms an "o" shape*

O.O

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~Nora

wow. this is really good. I like Scythe..and Cancer...but Scythe better. Even if he is kinda freaking me out. I keep trying to figure out who the Predator, Consumer, and Producer are. But update soon!

Welcome back! Yeah, took you a while but ya were well missed and so forgiven. At least by me if by no one else. Eh... Scythe scares me. A lot. And Rayth is... I don't know about him. I still kinda like him. And I'm glad Cancer's back! I missed him, yurps. And Lynn's annoying. Well, was. Guess she was since she's dead now, and all... Poor girl. Something about Scythe's dad gets me. I don't know. He's definitely someone. Gonna watch out for him... Anyways, terrific chapter as usual and, again, welcome back. I missed ya and your terrific writing. -bows- Bye bye!

I did not see that coming. WHAT IS GOING ON! Keep writing cuz i realy gotta find out what's happening. It's craziness.

Holy shit, this is good. Confusing. But mostly good.

I love messed-up characters. And lets be honest - this town is like a therapist's wet dream.

If Bones is what i think it is, I know some people who do it, but with roadkill not live animals. Which is sicker.

PLEASE update soon. I love Scythe. And Cancer. And even Raythe. I'm not going to write my guesses on whose the predator, the consumer and the producer - even though i do have ideas - because chances are, ill just embarrass myself later on.

But anyway, love this. Its going in my favorites the moment I can find the energy to log in.

I really like your writing. I hope to actualy find which chapter i was on...or go back and read the whole thing. Keep up the good work.

Lilly

e feesh thats gross. i don't like that. i actually gt acomment this time. im so happy. sad i know. shutup.

Yay you updated! What happened to Lynn anyway? I have a feeling that Cancer went to distract Angela so that something could happen to Lynn.. S Plus what is Bones anyway? Scythe and Rayth are sick in the head..Lol.. Did Angela did something to Scythe and he wanted to take revenge or something? And is Cancer the Predator and Scythe's the Consumer? So that leaves the Producer with Rayth.. And there's also a Hope(is there?)somewhere in there which I guess is the little kid..

Rawr.. This story is very confusing but addicting.. Please please please update soon ]

Updated! Woot! I've got to pass out candy so sorry if it's short.

Lynn. Aw, poor Lynn. I actually feel sorry for her. Sure, she was pretty annoying and extremely clueless but she's still a person. And she died. -pouts- Wonder who killed her...

Did I tell you that I love Cancer? I do. It's true. And Scythe because he reminds me of someone I know. But the boy I know doesn't kill anything except maybe for bugs. Well, at least that I know of.

I seriously just want to jump into the story and give Angela a big hug. Poor girl has been through so much she needs someone...stable to comfort her. -sighs-

This chapter was pretty intense. Can't wait for more :)!

oh gross

You know, in most stories, when there is an elegent you-better-be-wearing-pantyhose party and the lights go out, something sexual(ish) usually occurs. Like kissing. Or groping. Or hugging. Or a romantic brush of bodies that leaves some stupid corny note in the chick's bra.

But, no. In your story, when the lights go off, someone dies. By machete.

Not a knife (ok, a really scary, big, curved knife) or a gun or a spork. A machete.

Poor Lynn. Poor innocent, slighty dumb Lynn. All she wanted was to drink and dance and find Angela and people watch. And she ends up being killed by a mysterious person who tripped and fell whilst carrying a machete, and caught himself on her stomach.

Notice I said himself. It could be a typo, but I'm not sayin'.

Rayth is still creepy with capital e's. He makes my skin crawl and yet he is an imaginary character (I tell myself that so I can sleep at night) in a fictional story. Scythe is very screwed up, but that is really not news to anyone.

And Angela. Poor, Angela. I just bet she was wishing she was born a fur tree. No crazy ex-best friends with machete-ish urges who have older brothers that secretly want to rape you or a boy with a terminal disease for a name that might actually be as lethal as his name suggests.

Oh. Look. That got all poetry like at the end. Go me.

I betcha Cancer is going to go ape crazy and climb to the top of the lighthouse screaming that he is Scythe's secret lover and he can't stand the sexual tension anymore so everyone must die by long curved blade.

I kinda like Cancer though. Does that make me a horrible person? Should I seek therepy?

Nah. If Rayth isn't going, I sure as hell don't need to.

Good, wonderful, amazing,surperb and other adjectives that mean the same thing chapter.

Until next time!

ohh perkin-docks! wat a mess...

"And I thought of Bones. Bones and crunching blood and squeals. Shrieking.

(it’s all in the way we take revenge, little Angel).

Scythe’s fingers pressed against matted fur."

? (smack'd)

I'm starting to think that they're all mental. Or schizophrenia.

Buut... that's just me.

And does Angela like Scythe or Cancer? Really..

-Mellowdy

(Happy Early Halloween.)