Reviews for Predator
personwithaccount chapter 18 . 10/29/2007
HOLY CRAP!HOLY CRAP!HOLY-

who's the killer? o.

welcome back! we've missed you bunches.
Le Meg chapter 18 . 10/29/2007
Damn. lol, that is a painful way to go. Silly and naive as she was, can't help but feel pretty bad for Lynn. She wasn't ever on the same playing field, never had a chance. Part of me is kind of happy that Cancer apologized, and part of me really wants Angela to keep her head straight on her shoulders and be careful. He's kind of her last source of comfort, but I can't help feeling this is just going to turn around and bite her in the ass. Which seems to happen a lot. I'm hoping she really does have a plan of her own here.
cocoartist chapter 18 . 10/29/2007
I love Cancer so much. He's my favourite by a long shot. I like this chapter, I think your writing's matured since you last updated. However, one small point- chandeliers are never made from diamonds. The most expensive are Crystal. But that's a minor point. Update soon please! I love this story. x
teardrop chapter 18 . 10/29/2007
i LOVE YOU! u dnt know how happy u have made me! so YAY! :D

it was truly very dramatic. didnt like lynn but i didnt want (or expect )her to die either but that just goes to show u, i can never know what to expect from u :P!

hm did really well (suprise suprise) 7 As and 2 Bs (at 88 and 89 %) so im happy at the moment. but A levels is, for a lack of a better word, trully a bitch. i dnt know how i'll pass but hey life is short so why spend ur time worrying :D...
happycamper chapter 18 . 10/29/2007
intense..
freakyAngel chapter 18 . 10/29/2007
Oh my God.

Just for the incredible drama and suspense in this chapter, you're definitely forgiven for not updating for so long.

Be faster, though! I'd almost given up on this story, to tell the truth. You were taking so long...

By the way, I've told my teacher about this story and Catharsis, so hopefully you'll get a review or something from him soon. The stories were so long I couldn't print them out, so he'll definitely be coming online to read them. Yeps.

Great job on this chapter! :)
Ravene chapter 18 . 10/28/2007
My GOD. That was a f*cking amazing chapter! You really had my eyes glued to the screen. I can't describe how great it really was; suppose it really was worth the wait.
Stoker chapter 18 . 10/28/2007
GASP! I was wondering if it was Lynn, actually, when the lights went out. I'm so into this story. I'm so excited to see what's next. :) I did have a better day today, but the new chapter was amazing, so it just added on to it. Hehe.
Scribblesandink chapter 18 . 10/28/2007
Oh shit that was kinda weird-creepy. Not as freaky as I know it'll get, but still...gah. I reserve judgment on ALL characters until the story is over. No more cookies or hugs-of-doom for Scythe, Cancer, or ANY of them. Except for Angela. She needs a cookie. and a hug.

All in all, a bit of a nonsensical review. Oh well, it's how my head feels, what with NaNo coming up so soon. Can't wait for the next chapter!
CreativeEdge chapter 18 . 10/28/2007
oh wow oh wow oh wow...I'm speechless and confused, but in a good -I-want-to-know more sort of way. wow.

This chapter was really... pretty to read, that sounds odd when I write it but what i mean is .. the imagery in your words was really beautiful...and scary.

Hana I think there something wrong with me, Scythe is still totally my fave.

Completely worth the wait.

-Ani
feather-ink chapter 18 . 10/28/2007
Very nicely done. Can't wait to see how it will end up.
sweetdealer chapter 18 . 10/28/2007
oh wow, wow, wow.

i never know what is going to happen in this story.

crazy. but i do know that angela and cancer are meant to be together. :D

... i hope...

haha.

anyways, super duper chapter of course!

stay amazing!
hellokiara chapter 18 . 10/28/2007
I almost cried when I saw you updated.

How crazy is that?

I'm crazy over this story.

It feels like I waited forever for this chapter.

It was amazing; it just keeps getting better and better.

I'm still completely lost about what's happening which is a good thing, huh? D

You left us at a cliffy which means you must update asap lol don't keep us waiting; pleassee? ]

xoxkiara
teardrop456 chapter 18 . 10/28/2007
omg

wtf?

ah! you must update soon!
wilted paper flowers chapter 17 . 10/18/2007
This story is so far awesome. Amazing writing and all. I love how everything is like a puzzle, that will eventually fit...right? Be sure to tell us who the Predator, Consumer, and Producer are! Man, I'm killing myself trying to figure out who is who. Please please please update soon! :D
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