I was wondering when you're going to update?

I guess I read this story just in time for a new update! I'm so glad I found it. It makes me a bit mad that I'm just jumping on the wagon as of now, and not being there when new chapters were being posted.

Okay, I love Angela. She's so innocent and adorable it's like she's a little kid stuck playing with the confusing grownups.

I want to know what happened at the party and how it connects to the story so badly that it makes waiting for a new chapter that much more painful!

Scythe scares the living crap out of me. I know someone almost exactly like him, though I don't believe he's ever killed anyone...or played a game similar to Bones. And Cancer confuses me to the brink of insanity. Does he like Angela or is he just (excuse the language)fucking with her mind? Also Raythe seemed like he would be this nice, quiet guy who everyone likes to pick on and Angela would get with him (i wasnt hoping that, i just thought it) but I guess not. haha.

oh dear, the only way to appease my confusion is by another update. Totally awsome. Your awesome, this story is awesome. I am jealous.

This is one crazy-ass plot. I love it, especially since I keep changing my mind about what I think is going to happen with every new chapter. Hopefully you'll keep it going, but either way it's been a really great read. Angela is an interesting girl. She seems so naive and innocent, but I keep getting this feeling that she's hiding something huge and dark. But at this point, I guess it's pretty obvious that there is something really dark going on between the lines, so. lol Anyway, kudos!

where are you! i've been waiting and waititng and waiting...and september is almost over! how could u! u shuld be very ahamed of urself...no im kidding but im still waiting for THE update so please do it quickly before i read the story (mainly my favourite parts of ir which usually revolve around caner and angela...) again..that'll make it the seventh time...

well i did pretty okay in my o level examz (suprisingly )...how did u do...?

lovely story- but before i keep reading, i have a question, and this might sound offensive (hopefully it doesnt) but i am actually very confused about this... is angela just crazy hyper/dramatic, or is she mentally- well- ill?

sorry again if that sounds ofensive, but i hav to know

ARGH!

Here I am. Reviewing. Finally. I was sick today (bad throat - have a hoarse voice like an old paedophile), and decided to catch up on Predator. Argh. I love this story. But its only going to unfold and make sense at the end, isn't it?

I'm completely stumped as to what is going on. I think, 'OMG I get it thats whats going on - wait, no... '

Part of me desperately wants it to end to see what happens to Angela and see whats GOING ON, but part of me never wants it to ned because... gah, it just CAN'T end.

Anyway, I love the way you write, with that morbid tinge, not so over descripted it suffocates you but descripted enough to give an idea and let you imagine the rest.

I think Scythe and Rayth have concocted (is that spelled right? psh) some sort of revenge against Angela, with Cancer involved, but he's not that keen, or is being a lone gunman and stuffing up the plan somehow. I have no idea.

I want too know what happened at the rest of the party, what was so bad that made Rayth and Scythe's mother hate Angela. Even if she was told to cut the wires by someone else, so it wasn't really (enitrely) her fault, what exactly happeenedd?

Argh I'm babblliinng. I can't wait till september. And hopefully you can pop out a little catharsis sequal.

-Lurker

omg.

you're brilliant. i don't even know how you manage it.

anyways, i basically read the entire story in two days, after work and such. it took me a while to figure out what a torch was... (us americans aren't too bright, i've figured out, or maybe it's just me :/ ) but yeah... i got it... flashlight. those are cool. :D

and i'm really keen for an update, so don't take much longer.

that's an order. ;)

Review time!

Scythe: You know, he's a strange chicken. He kills a guy, by dropping a car onto his tied up form, and then, he decides he's horny and tries to get his jollies on with his best bud. [I feel like we're drifting apart...] Yeah, so undress yo self so we can be CLOSE again. Poor Scythe. So young, and so phycotic. I used to lyke him too. I did. And now, I feel so betrayed...

Raythe: Yeah, ok he is a scary mofo. I bet he is just waiting for the moment when angela isn't paying attention and then he's gonna jump her and ravish her sensless. I bet. Fifty bucks. I used to think he was this quiet guy. I shoulda known. It's them quiet ones you gotta watch. He be crazy I tell ya. He makes Scythe look like Mr. Rogers.

Oh will you be my neighbor? If Scythe ever said that I would run away screaming. If Raythe ever said that I'd prolly piss myself.

Cancer: Well, he's a bit of an arse but that's ok, because he is a cute arse. And what with him sticking his tongue down Abe licolns mouth eh? I know why. He's a silly duck. And I don't like his lighter. Just so you know. He lurvs Angela. He wants to have her babies. Or, you know. Kill her. Whatever comes first.

Erm um...Angela: Poor Angela. I bet she is so confused. With her best friend being phycotic and his brother not really sane and Cancer who keeps losing control of his tongue, sticking it places it don't belong. She's just gonna crack, one of these days. She's gonna climb that lighthouse and jump. ISN'T SHE! I knew it. She's gonna crack and fal...and then bye bye Angel.

Righto. This review was lame and retarded, but I'm tired and so if nothing made sense that is why. My brain turned off half-way through this.

But I still like your story. Even, if Raythe scares me. Alot. Did I mention that?

:P Hanging stuff like bells or beads from a ceiling fan sounds like a fun idea! And, wow...they're a lot of messed up kids, aren't they O_o? But I like the characters, because it's not often I get to read about stuff like this...And WOW is there a lot of drama! I'm a little bit confused, but that'll clear up soon, right? Great story, can't wait for more

Hmm. I don't like Angela's mom. And I miss Angela's old self. Shows me I'm not the only really crazy person in this world. Even if she is a story character. I really like your story. It's so complex, it keeps the reader interested. And it's a really good story, too. The characters seem almost human. 0.0 Anyways, I can't wait for September because then you can update yay! But I hope you have a great vacation. Lots of Kitty Power to you and a good summer!

Is Angel gonna be like Criss Angel? *wide-eyed*

Scythe, Raythe, and Cancer are hot. You are hot. I am hot. We all are hot. I feel awsome.

Me no likey Cancer's daddy. Nor do me likey Ant and Herb's momma. Nor do I likey Angel's momma. She sucks butt.

Complete character choosing of lyky or no lyky.

Canciee-kin very immaturee. Why he did that crappy immature thing is beyond my thinkking. More like my intelligence.

I hate you. You insult my intelligence. I love you. You get to be awesome.

I want mo' AnthonyxAngela-ness.

OOH, I want way mo' LionelxAngela-ness.

Cancer knows he loves Angel! Mwah-hahaha!

He must!

During part-ayy, he goes head-over-heels fo' huuh! WEE. My plan is genious! kekeke.

Nah.

We need more rape attempts. And mo' deaths. And more fights. And mo' romance.

um hi..i was just wondering if Scythe and Rayth are mentally distrubed...have fun on ur holiday

oh, damnit! september? really? ah well, man.. anywayss, i just read this story and i didnt feel like going back and reviewing every chapter so sorry if it's kind of big..

i have to admit that when i started reading this i hated Angel (wait wait wait. can i call her that or is that only allowed with her close friends? she's a character so im sure she wont mind.. unless you do. hmm ill call her Ang ((which is probably worse, but it's easier to type) Anywho... her character actually grew on me because now that i think about it, i sometimes act like her. you know, break out into random song while speaking to someone in conversation that sort of goofy stuff. plus, Angela changed in this chapter. she wasnt her normally bubbly self. i guess everything is just starting to press down and sink in..

when i first read what they did with the Bones game, WHOAH! haha. seriously though. is Scythe okay? he is one sick pup.

cant wait to find out more about the diary and how everything connects. also cant wait for an update. love the story!

I wish that Angela wouldn't take it. If she just stopped pretending everything was fine then she wouldn't have half the problems she has, but then you wouldn't have a story.

It's really good, by the way.

It's different too and interesting. You really draw me in deeply whenever I read your stuff.

You're characters are really intriguing as well. I like it when an author keeps my mind turning, especially with questions. Too many stories today have cookie-cutter plot lines. With yours I have too many thoughts as to which way yours could go.

I also love how there are many stories wrapped up in this. There are so many elements: the diary, the predator/consumer/producer, angela, cancer, scythe, ryath, and the whole Bones thing. And all of it's connected.

Anywho, I love it a lot and so I decided to tell you in the long winded way. ]

I ALWAYS write more than I should about stuff (Luckily my English teacher doesn't get too mad, especially when she assigns a 350 word paper and I turn out a 1,0 word paper. )_

Again, I love the story.

Stephanie

woahh...i can feel the change in angela after her last encounter with scythe and the whole tyson thing. she's no more her bright, bubbly self and has somewhat gone quieter, more suspicious and like...she doesn't possess the faith she used to have before. i love the way u captured her slow change in her personality, and the paragraph describing the way things had changed between scythe and her was seriously beautiful! it must have been hard to realise scythe wasn't the person she thought she was...(woahh, i've started to talk like these people are real! o.O)

and why do I have a feeling that guy eleanor mentions in her journal is going to end up killing her or is going to DRIVE her to commit suicide or something? hehehe. i'm SO right, i KNOW! :p

on the whole, great chapter and i'll be waiting for the next update!

(thanks a lot for the awesome review, btw. it really made my day!)