Reviews for Predator
IMAN ANGRY chapter 16 . 6/26/2007
WTF

I SUBMITTED A SHITASS LONG REVIEW THE OTHER DAY AND NOW LOOK AT IT

WHERE THE DSGSD DID IT GO?

WHERE

WHERE WHERE WHERE

HOLYDSGDG

dude

naf

it was so longg ):):

i spent hours on it.

AND I DONT SEE IT.

-anti fp-
freakyAngel chapter 17 . 6/26/2007
I am getting slightly worried here.

WHY THE HELL AREN'T YOU UPDATING SOONER?

Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot to introduce myself. I was just browsing through profiles when I saw your story. It seems great, so can you please update quick-quick? I hate waiting for updates, specially slow ones. Makes it seem as if the author's not gonna care 'bout the story anymore.

Yeah, anyways.

I like Scythe. He's freaking nuts, but maybe I just like the crazy ones. Hahas. And I seriously cannot understand why Leon doesn't like his name. I've got a friend called Leon, and he loves it.

Ah well. To each his own I guess. Though Cancer is a cool name.

Anyway,I'll be waiting! :)
Mellowdy chapter 17 . 6/25/2007
Aw. Angela's jealous. (coos and pinchs cheek)

-Mellowdy
Slideshow chapter 17 . 6/25/2007
hello bby

IS ANGELA HAVING AN AFFAIR WITH AN OLDOLD MAN? O: O: IS SHE. IS SHE? BECAUSE IF SHE IS I HOPE HE'S HOT. old guys who are goodlooking are hot k. just so you know. just so you'll know these things like i do. LIKE I KNOW ALL.

hi naffness, i missed you :3
Death Princess chapter 17 . 6/25/2007
god cancer is so immature. poor angela. oh and this guy who's in2 ealeanor, i think he's like cancer in another life i.e. EVIL! and this review is not lame. its colloquial. yeah.
Creative Destruction chapter 17 . 6/25/2007
DUDE. I'm still confused and that's so frustrating. GAH! Freaking Scythe. So frustrating. But I really want her to just get with freaking Cancer already! So yeah...update soon please! ;)
Mabella chapter 17 . 6/25/2007
Hmm. I think there's something seriously wrong with me, because for some reason I'm still rooting for ScytheXAngela. o_o I don't like Cancer. He pisses me off. I love your story though, but Im still confused as to how the diary entries fit into the actual plot(if they do at all.) I'll be waiting for the next update. ;)
kris89 chapter 5 . 6/24/2007
please don't take this badly but im confused. honestly im trying to hang on as long as possible but i still don't have a clue what is going on here. could you give me a summary on what this is about.
CreativeEdge chapter 17 . 6/24/2007
Phew ... that was me letting go of the tense breath I'd been holding the entire chapter. It's funny as soon as I thought I was beginning to figure it out - the story would take a completely different angle. Cancer kissing abe ? And wow Rayth was not being reassuringly silent like he usually is, and Scythe well, by this point I'm used to him being psychotically ( hot ) unpredictable...

The diary is like a whole other fic in itself.

Angela has changed throughout it too, she's definitely more careful with her words now which is adding to the already brimming bucket on tension .

Keep up the good work, you chapters and this story in general are soo well written that an august update is worth the wait.

-Ani
personwithaccount chapter 17 . 6/24/2007
I hope you have fun on your vaca. The story's great. It has to be one of my favorites. Hope you can review soon. I'm hooked.
25ariel25 chapter 17 . 6/24/2007
I'm still so confused cuz i don't know what bones is or the significance of eleanor's diary. pretty crazy. can't wait till it all comes together
toxic-noodle725 chapter 17 . 6/24/2007
WASS HAPPENIN HOMIE? long time no write huh? oh maybe u r psychic. GASP! u should make a fortune telling stand...oh. think of all the ppl that'll be nervous and scared shitless after getting their palms read. hee. well i thank thee for thy gift. t'was lovely. it'd be lovlier if u would hurry up and update the next chappie too. *nods enthusiastically. yeah, you should do that like now!
Her Wishing Well chapter 17 . 6/24/2007
Ohh whats going on with Cancer? And what does the diary mean? I'm even more hooked now (if thats possible) i hope you can get another chapter out before you go, but have a nice holiday anyway.
Stoker chapter 17 . 6/23/2007
The new chapter made a bad day a bit better. Can't wait to read more of it. Have a good trip, though! :)
CallMeCute chapter 17 . 6/23/2007
hmm and shes not even comtemplating going to the police
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