Reviews for Predator
heart shaped lies chapter 16 . 5/30/2007
Ohmygod, a lot happened in this chapter. The flashback and the present. I hate Scythe and I wonder why Scythe's dad asked Angela to cut the wires...god, it's all so complicated. I loved the way you wrote this chapter though, it was chilling and full of emotion.

Update. Soon. Please?
Her Wishing Well chapter 16 . 5/30/2007
OMG no, why is scythe being all mean and violent. Damn. This was great. I was totally hooked on this chapter and everything is all very suspicious. I wish i could write a better review but my brain isnt working properly today. Anyway, cant wait for the next chapter! :)
teardrop chapter 16 . 5/30/2007
okay im seriously confusued but confusion is good...rite? anyways another awesome chapter (as usual) and now im totally anti scythe and i just wanna say that cancer rules bigtime. well next week i have chemistry (i suck at that)and physics (not one of my good subjects ) next week so basically im screwed but i still managed to read ur story so u shuld be luck with ur examz though but u still have to update. n if it makes u feel any better ..i hate revision too :)...
AubriannaKnight chapter 16 . 5/29/2007
Oh my. This chapter was crazy. I wonder why the little boy was at Scythe's house, and why he had a gun and where he got it from. Also if he knew that Angela was in that room. I wonder if he didn't show up if raythe would have ever let her out. At first I though maybe Scythe actually cared about Angela, but now I want to beat his ass so bad. All these people are playing a game with her and it's pissing me off.
Rose Rampage chapter 16 . 5/29/2007
Holy Macrol! I absolutly love your story! It is rediculous, and i mean that in the best possible way. Seriously, i'll read it, and then the rest of the day i'll be either thinking about it, or freaked out. As to the characters, amazingly written. For a bit Scythe was my favorite, now i'm not too sure, well obviously seeing as how he basically tried to rape Angel. Cancer, i'm still not sure about. His cocky personality makes you want to love him, but like Scythe, i just can't help but feeling something is wrong. Ah! I can't even explain how cool this story is, and how obsessed i am. Can't wait to read the rest!

Mellowdy chapter 16 . 5/29/2007
What was Scythe trying to do? Rape her in the snow? o.O

CreativeEdge chapter 16 . 5/29/2007
Wow... that was intense, and an utterly thrilling chapter. man, it was just a whirlwind, it's getting quite scary now, and really unpredictable, I liked the flashback at the end, and of course the Scythe/Angela -ness, okay so they aren't exactly meshing at the moment what with the murder and buried secrets and all but there's potential, I just know there is. hehe

well done.

moonlights desire chapter 16 . 5/29/2007
aw man! it would have been so hot if she hadn't not-wanted it! damn it! I like them both! and yeah - scythe killed a guy! but he's like hot! and cancer is ever hotter! shit! what are you going to do! this HAS to end well or i'll cry!
Scribblesandink chapter 16 . 5/29/2007
Damn, you always manage to somehow do something completely unexpected. When I first started the story I thought the twins were nice. I think I want to vomit now, just like Angela. Poor girl; these people sure are strange. Can't wait to see what happens in the upcoming chapters! I'm still not quite sure what Bones is, and I have no clue as to what they all want with Angela, but...well, here's to hoping something will clear up for me soon! I'm just enjoying the story. How many more chapters can we expect?
Waffle Rocket chapter 15 . 5/22/2007
Alright... That's getting kinda scary. But I absolutely love this story. I read it like five times before actually reviewing. Well, update soon. I seriously can't wait to find out what's gonna happen here. Although... it's pretty confusing. Getting clearer though. Very interesting. All kitty and meow regards to you. LOL...
Natajaaay chapter 15 . 5/16/2007
this is pretty freaky stuff, and i'm not sure i completely get it. i suppose i'll just have to keep readng, right?
an chapter 14 . 5/14/2007
I just wanted to ask you this: Has she seen worse than that? Meaning has she witnessed something as horrible as killing someone? Her reaction to the kid's death would make perfect sense if that was the case. ( without her being mental of course...cos' if she were than EVERYTHING goes hehe)
an chapter 15 . 5/14/2007
more more I want more:)

I've been under the impression they wanted to kill her but now I'm not so sure anymore and I LOVE all the uncertainty and suspense...:)
Agent Raindrop chapter 15 . 5/13/2007
oh WOW. WHAT'S GOING ON? I'm so confused by it all. UPDATE OR I'LL NEVER KNOW!

I lovelovelove this story. Its so mysterious and unpredictable, or at least I can't predict it. And the characters are awesome and pretty well defined and characterated and all that wonderful stuff that characters should be. I heart this story and I can't wait till you update chica!

See you later!
25ariel25 chapter 15 . 5/12/2007
So awesome chapter. I've sort of been back and forth on Angela but now I am absolutely positive that she is not right in the head. She is going to a party for someone who just KILLED A PERSON and someone who just BEAT HER UP! What is her problem? I love love love Cancer, but he's kinda scary, so I'm waiting to see what happens. And I still don't know what the heck bones is about plus when are we gonna find out about that thing Angela keeps trying to forget?
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