-bangs head repeatedly against wall from frustration- Argh...my head...It hurts! Why must you do these things to me? Oww...so...confusing. God...I should just stick to the simple stories where you don't have to guess anything and just stick around for the ride.

Curse you!

Lol. Eh, but then it'd be boring as hell. Why do we say that? Hell couldn't be boring; i mean anything that strikes fear into our hearts can't be boring. That'd defeat the point of boring. unless someone's personal hell is being bored to death..or being bored at all...so then it'd be boring and why am I even talking about this?

Moving on...Cancer is so sexy. M...-huggles and ducks-

later gator! (and a waitor cuz isn't that what Cancer is?)-Avey

ok what? things are definitely speeding up.

ahahahahahaawh

all those little definitions. man naff. MAN. yerkinky. ee since whenhm. since ive been gone. SINCE IVE BEEN GONE. haveyou missed thee that much. .fornication and adultery. nowiknow whatyou think of whenyou're without me.

lolololol.

my spacebar is shotto fuck incaseyoucouldnt shit thisis annoying.

i'llgive you a fullreview later k. thisistoo damn vexing.

-hasbabieswithcancer-

bye.

dontsueme.

causeiloveyou.

i do madam.

byenow.

they just killed a kid. whatshername. shes acting too normal! i'd have gone psycho. she acts like its all okay. -sob- its not. "lets have fun" -smack- what a turd. what a stupid idiot. and then its all happypappyness. oh yes someone died but now we're off to play.

cani come into the story. can i. can i. can i come and beat the bejeesus out of angela?

ANDTHEN

AND THEN I CAN MAKE BABIES WITH CANCER WHEN IM DONE.

-loseshead-

wow. that was one intense chapter! But i was super tired when I read it so i dont think i got all of the details.

I am happy to hear that it ends somewhat happily, it would break my heart if it didn't! I really really like cancer tho, alot. But it seems like there is just as much evidence to say that he is the only good one and to the only bad one. Tho, Raythe and Scythe can not be good seeing as one killed a boy and one is pretty much abusing Angela.

I am sad to think what will happen with Angela and Cancer tho, he will obviously be REALLY mad if she misses meeting him at 7. I hope she finds a way to get out.

Sorry, i am completely rambling now, I told you i was tired.

But really, amazing chapter, full of imagery and detail and just.. emotion. I loved it. CANT WAIT for the next installment!

oops. wrong account. screw that; i don't feel like signing out & then in again. it's too much bother. you know how it is when things are too much bother. & no i haven't been online & i haven't read your email either. but i got it & ish marked as important so i don't forget to read it before i get off ... *pauses awkwardly* ... anyways, i love this. i absolutely love this. i had no idea you were going in this direction - mostly because i skim-read too much (*insert out-of-body laughter here*) - but it's perfect. i adore how much you throw into your writing. you know what i mean, the things i always whine about. they make this yours. they're your mark, in a way. & when that gets questioned you stick to it. anyways. i'm off track. i just - i feel like i should've picked up on this way faster. there's a little guilt. a little narrowing of eyes over you not telling me straight out. haha. keep writing. i don't care how long it takes or how bad it gets. when people say anything else tell them to eff off. or ask me to do it for you.

you're something special, i hope you know.

hearts!

-kait

Wow, that was intense, I'm not sure whether things are starting to click or just get a hell of a lot more complicated.

No Scythe this chapter ( but Cancer definitely was hot this chapter, so mysterious, every character is actually. I wonder what the "event" in the past is ...and it's part of Angela's doing...

Anyways well done, really really well done

-Ani

6 weeks Eks.

No Scythe this chapter pouts.

hmm im wondering now if maybe he's not out to destroy her for revenge but to keep her...I guess it depends on how much one is to read into Cancers statement of god not protecting her if she breaks all the commandments and then Scythe's earlier talk to her about not wanting to go to hell alone.

Is Lue's Scythe's kid...lol that would make him very young at the conception.

Anyway great chapter I still think Angela should just kick them all to the curb and become an independent woman some how I think she would be much happier but I just don't see her doing that at this stage in her life. But I would sure love to see the look on their faces if she did do it.

Oh my god, I'm so confused. I love this story but i just can't work my head around it. There are so many mysteries to it. I'm glad things are going to start answering things sort of soon though. Erm, questions well if i was her i would just ask like what the hell was going on with everyone. But i think she asked more questions in this chapter which was good. You are a great writer, really unique. Can't wait for an update.

hey. having my first gcse exam on tuesday (god save me!) but ur story is SO addictive that i had to check every single day. u updated very quickly so YAH! personaly i like cancer more than scythe and i think rayth is weird. so who the psycopath in this story...lol...anyways great job aand update quickly. tootles...

this is some pretty confusing, but interesting read. wow. right now it's really confusing, but if you can tie it back together at the very end...wow. that would be AMAZING. i am looking forward to the next chapter very very much, so please keep updating!

This.. is a really twisted story. So many things to remember.. and digest.

-Mellowdy

(Hapy Belated May Day)

Wow, what a cliffie! Amazing chapter, as always. I hope you update soon, though, because I'm positively desperate to find out what will happen next.

ah! a cliffie! oh no! you better update soon! I'm dying!

so something big is about to happen.

i can feel it.

that and that last diary entry kinda gave it away.

i'm freaked out now lol

it's still complicated

and i'm finding it hard to get...

but i'll get it eventually )

can't wait for the next one

how many chapter are left?

izzie